Taking a fic for a test drive--
If I could get some opinions on the following, I'd be very grateful. This fic is set about five years after "Chosen"/"Home" and is a BtVS/AtS crossover. I'm not even going to attempt to match it up with the upcoming season of AtS, so don't worry about spoilers--this is all my speculation about what the Jossverse might look like in five years.
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I think, as other have pointed out, that I would like to see a little more of Connor/Dawn before the action begins. Connor seems to me, too easily to accept the completely new worldview he get presented with, and Connor was / is? not Oz. And yes I know that, they do same thing in the TV show to new characters. Why not let Connor be the rational "Innocent" that have to question every thing, for his own sanity sake. Let him express that he feels that in someway, that there are something the fang gang will not tell him. Should there not be some tension between Angel and the rest of fang gang, from the betrayal, that Angel memory altering action where to them. Some barbs between Angel and Wesley on that subject perhaps.
I did like your Cordelia a gentler Dru. But why does everybody call her Cordy?, fannon? cannon?.
and where is Xander ( completely irrational fanboy question ).
and have you read Kyra Cullinans "Wonderland" 500 words Connor/Dawn http://narrowstreets.net/fic/wonderland.html
and sorry about my English, miss English teacher.
Lakrids
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