Fic: Crossing the Bar (27/?)

Jul 26, 2011 21:55

Author: Honorat
Rating: PG13
Characters: Norrington, the crew of the Dauntless, Jack Sparrow, and the crew of the Black Pearl
Pairing: Jack/Anamaria somewhat; Jack/Pearl definitely
Disclaimer: The characters of PotC! She’s taken them! Get after her, you feckless pack of ingrates!

Summary: Meanwhile back on board the Black Pearl, Jack has a ( Read more... )

crossing the bar

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aletheiafelinea July 28 2011, 20:46:13 UTC
Third chapter in a month. I died and the Heaven exists, the only possible explanation.

Poor Commodore will get a heart attack. To spoil such a fine officer! Terrible. Tsk, tsk, Port Royal's court will run out of paper, when it comes again to write down Jack's crimes.

she watched Jack as he slept
A few chapters ago, I've been thinking 'how long yet... he must drop, at last'. And I secretly hoped for exactly this situation.

Jack hadn’t two innocent thoughts to rub together.
Anamaria at full blast and close range was enough to make a man deaf and glad of it.
*g*

The first mate could manage a stalk, even on crutches, Gibbs noted.
*G!* And the delicious image of the following scene which it brought to mind! ;D

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honorat July 28 2011, 23:04:00 UTC
Yes, three chapters have made it through the gate. Which is about as many as I've written in the last three years or more. I don't know what got into me. Enjoy heaven while it lasts, but you know resurrection is commonplace in the PotC universe.

Alas, poor Norrington. He should know better than to let Jack have uninterrupted time with anyone he wants uncharmed. Will Turner, Elizabeth Swan, and now Alexander Walton. I wonder what the official name of Jack's crime would be?

It's rather funny. I decided it was time for some more fun writing Jack and Anamaria together, so I sent him to visit her, and he fell asleep all on his own. I didn't know you could get fictional characters so tired they'd do that without your permission. I'm glad if fulfilled a wish.

Thank you for such a lovely comment and for letting me know what gave you joy in this chapter :D Hearing from readers like you always gives me joy.

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pearlseed July 28 2011, 23:37:03 UTC
The crime? Alienation of alligance? Recruiting to true? Jack's going to do exactly that...maybe it's pheromones or some sort of chemical reaction combo of salt water, vitamin D from the sun and Jack's own superheating carbon based incubator...Jack's a very specialized 'virus' just gets in and re-routes your very own cells. Or not...

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aletheiafelinea July 29 2011, 21:17:46 UTC
I wonder what the official name of Jack's crime would be?
Leading decent craftsmen, fiancées and subordinates astray. And looking infuriatingly miserable and harmless when at the point of a sword.

he fell asleep all on his own. I didn't know you could get fictional characters so tired they'd do that without your permission.
*wipes laugh tears* I have to try this someday, too.

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aletheiafelinea July 29 2011, 21:22:25 UTC
Ah, I forgot. You know this? ;)

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honorat July 31 2011, 02:27:42 UTC
LOL. They should add telemarketing, but then everyone would dislike Jack!

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