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honeynoir

fic: tick tock

Sep 14, 2011 00:17

Title: Tick Tock
Rating: G-ish/mild PG
Characters: Mels, Amelia, Rory
Wordcount: ~700
Disclaimer: I don’t own Doctor Who.
Summary: ‘She can see the ripples she’s causing.’
A/N: Spoilers up to, and including, LKH.

( more A/N, then fic )

fic, c: amy, c: rory, p: doctor/river, p: amy/rory, fic: doctor who, c: river, c: melody pond

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promethia_tenk September 14 2011, 17:52:46 UTC

Fantastic job fleshing out such a sketchily-drawn character and period in the Pond family's life. I've had a hard time deciding what to make of her, but you've managed to give a picture that's both sympathetic and disturbing and also quite real. I'm also rather enamored of this style of fic you've developed with all these wispy, dream-like snatches of moments that build up a picture of everything that's going on very economically. It's like impressionism or something : )

Also, Mels always getting to be the TARDIS when they play dolls! Lol.

honeynoir September 20 2011, 20:18:04 UTC

I've had a hard time deciding what to make of her, but you've managed to give a picture that's both sympathetic and disturbing and also quite real.
Me too. Did not expect Mels. And yay for sympathetic and disturbing!

It's like impressionism or something
Oh, I like that! Tbh, I'm always reallyclose to adding an A/N apologising for the lack of, well, actual prose, but then I tell myself it's a style. /cool story

The TARDIS is clearly the best one! (Also it occasionally lands on the Doctor. Purely by accident, of course.)

promethia_tenk September 21 2011, 16:05:33 UTC

Oh, I like that! Tbh, I'm always reallyclose to adding an A/N apologising for the lack of, well, actual prose, but then I tell myself it's a style. /cool story
Have actually done that myself, on several occasions. But would tell you (and myself, if I had any sense) that that's silly and it's a perfectly good way of writing and people can just deal with it : )

The TARDIS is clearly the best one! (Also it occasionally lands on the Doctor. Purely by accident, of course.)
Ha! Of course.

honeynoir October 1 2011, 15:45:25 UTC

Have actually done that myself, on several occasions. But would tell you (and myself, if I had any sense) that that's silly and it's a perfectly good way of writing and people can just deal with it : )
So true. Deal with it, or don't read. ;)

You can tell me, and I'll tell you, okay?

(late reply is late)

promethia_tenk October 2 2011, 02:34:56 UTC

Deal! *shakes on it*

honeynoir October 2 2011, 18:20:18 UTC

:D

Happy belated birthday, btw!

promethia_tenk October 2 2011, 18:21:36 UTC

Thank you! The universe and Steven Moffat gave me Doctor Who for my birthday! Best. Present. Ever.

honeynoir October 2 2011, 19:06:31 UTC

Yesss. I take it you liked the ep?

promethia_tenk October 4 2011, 18:25:05 UTC

At first I was a little let down and felt like it was lightweight and didn't give as much time to some things as I wanted it to (especially Amy and Rory getting resolution on loosing their baby), even if I was ultimately satisfied with the whole. But starting to dig through it a bit . . . yeah, it's amazing <3

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