Comments | honeynoir: fic: I'll have to come to you

honeynoir

fic: I'll have to come to you

Aug 25, 2013 23:19

Title: I'll have to come to you
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: Eleven, Twelve, Clara (Doctor/Clara)
Wordcount: ~1600
Disclaimer: I don’t own Doctor Who.
Summary: She was his big friendly button, his reset after the dark days.
A/N: Here’s another fic that’s taken like four months to finish, woo. Mentions character death and regeneration. Also really ( Read more... )

fic, fic: doctor who, c: eleven, p: eleven/clara, c: twelve, p: doctor/clara, c: clara oswin oswald

Comments 13

joshinator August 30 2013, 12:28:23 UTC

Gorgeous writing

honeynoir August 30 2013, 20:43:13 UTC

Thank you! :D

someplacetobe August 30 2013, 13:21:13 UTC

I'd not considered the regeneration! How will that affect things?

Lovely, as always. Quick question: did you mean to misspell 'acquaint' in the first set of quotations at the start?

honeynoir August 30 2013, 20:35:07 UTC

That is the question! She's, er, used to it, but he...?

Ack, no!! Thank you so much for letting me know! *fixes*

someplacetobe August 31 2013, 09:38:56 UTC

... might find that odd? Comforting?

You're welcome!

honeynoir August 31 2013, 20:36:13 UTC

Both? I guess we'll see at some point. :)

Thanks again!

judithjohn August 31 2013, 08:23:53 UTC

beautifully composed fic

honeynoir August 31 2013, 09:38:54 UTC

Thank you very much!

flowsoffire September 3 2013, 20:58:33 UTC

Why hello, you :D Eventually getting round to reviewing this ( ... )

honeynoir September 15 2013, 21:02:46 UTC

Why hello, you :D Eventually getting round to reviewing this! ♥
Hello! :D And never hurry...

The things she wouldn't do Tuesday evening-oh yes, this one wasn't forever just waiting for him to come take her away, she made him come at her own time and took things at her own rhythm (uncanny River parallel just came to mind…). Loving the parallels of Clara with the big friendly button, and the way he wouldn't name Amy, Rory, and River-the "greatest story never told". My heart! (I SWEAR I WAS LITERALLY LISTENING TO THIS VERY SONG AT THIS VERY SECOND HOW.)
There are so many uncanny River and Clara parallels when you think about it... O_o And how much do I love the name of that song? It's so perfect. (That is also uncanny. IT'S BECAUSE RIVER/DOCTOR IS SO FANTASTIC. SOMEHOW.)

Clara seeing him as a man-other River parallel! XD stop making me think he's got another meant-to-be. (Kidding, you can keep doing it, that's what reading other ships is for :D) I loved the way you showed Eleven seeing Clara and Clara seeing ElevenOkay, then I will ( ... )

flowsoffire September 26 2013, 20:49:16 UTC

Hello! :D And never hurry...
Butttttt things pile up! :D Evil.

There are so many uncanny River and Clara parallels when you think about it... O_o And how much do I love the name of that song? It's so perfect. (That is also uncanny. IT'S BECAUSE RIVER/DOCTOR IS SO FANTASTIC. SOMEHOW.)
Yessss, there are. All the loveliness. That song is beyond gorgeous, name and all ♥

Okay, then I will keep doing that! ;) (No, but srsly, River/Doctor OTP, I just... Eleven/Clara is so adorable and comes with a lot of baggage as well... I don't know why I ship those ships. XD)
Since when do we need reasons for shipping? :D It's a thing of the heart!

And my favourite part of the very end of NotD is when Clara is all "I can see you" and is so happy to see One. Like... she doesn't care what he looks like, she just cares that it's him and it's so beautiful.
Ohhhh, that's a lovely thing indeed :D

Yeah, I figure it's either that, because they're both used to change, or it's some sort of disaster, lol.
Makes sense :D

I love Clara being brave/scared and want ( ... )

a_phoenixdragon September 18 2013, 03:50:01 UTC

Perfection. But then...you have never given us anything less than that.

*HUGS*

honeynoir September 18 2013, 18:40:38 UTC

You are truly too kind! ♥

*HUGS*