Fic: Zero, PG13

Jun 08, 2011 18:16

Zero
Summary: Dean, frenzy (A follow up to A Hole in the World and Mirror, Water, Glass, two post-Hell, traumatized!Dean fics.)
Warnings: Self-harm, language
Spoilers: Hell plot points

Note: I wrote this very suddenly (it's very nearly flashfic, though not quite). The style is pretty different from the first two fics.

Zero )

sam, self-harm, trauma, hell, bobby, dean, alastair, fic

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tifaching June 8 2011, 22:50:40 UTC
A nicer follow up with Alastair making an appearance. LOL, I like the way you think.

The style is very different from the first two, but the story is just as devastating. Please keep them coming!

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honeylocusttree June 9 2011, 01:55:11 UTC
I wondered if it was kinda silly, so I'm glad that it works--I kinda like the fact that all three have different styles.

And yes, having Alastair show up will be nice...for me! But I have to figure out how to do it without having it devolve into slash, because homg, do I slash those two. Like crazy.

I'll try to get something together soon! Thanks bunches! <3

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geckoholic June 8 2011, 23:08:39 UTC
Gah, this hurts so much. And yet it's my favorite kind of hurt. ;) Great work!

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honeylocusttree June 9 2011, 01:53:23 UTC
OMG, mine too! This is synergy!

Glad you enjoyed this. ;) I love it when my total insanity as a writer is useful.

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borgmama1of5 June 9 2011, 03:01:24 UTC
Devastating. This reads like it could really be inside of Dean's head. And so broken...

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honeylocusttree June 9 2011, 22:09:41 UTC
My favorite flavor of Dean, I admit...

Er, you know what I mean.

Thanks very much!

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hoegh June 9 2011, 05:20:00 UTC
Damn, I'm getting addicted to these stories...

They definitely hurt real good.

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honeylocusttree June 9 2011, 22:00:49 UTC
Then I have achieved my aim! On both counts. ;)

Thanks very much! So glad to hear you enjoyed this!

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maypoles June 9 2011, 14:36:33 UTC
Omg there is more yayyyyy!

I LOVE this style - the disjointedness of the thought processes, the sparseness of the language, but yet not a word is wasted. And I love the ending and I really love your author's note.

If I get around to it I'll write a nicer follow-up to this, with more brotherly stuff, and maybe with Al actually making an appearance.

Both of those things are my FAVOURITE. <3

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honeylocusttree June 9 2011, 21:53:20 UTC
You know, I thought you might like that. ;)

I guess this officially a 'verse now, huh? Yipe!

I guess now I have to make every effort to write the follow-up, huh? I'll see what I can do! (Wait, should I do this one or the serial-killer one first?)

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maypoles June 10 2011, 00:10:13 UTC
Yes, it's totally a 'verse! \o/

Also, ugh, idek, the serial killer one is beyond fab too. Do whichever one speaks to you and I'm so there!

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honeylocusttree June 10 2011, 12:49:29 UTC
I guess I'll just have to write them both! (Or whichever one proves less difficult to plot out, anyway.)

*plots*

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