The Aforementioned Graphic Sequel (with cliffhanger ending thrown in at no extra cost)

[homicidalslayer]

My First Gossip Girl sequel
Title: Heaven on Earth
Pairing(s): Chuck/Nate, some Blair/Nate
Rating: 16+
Spoilers: Early Season 1, Hand Maiden’s Tail
Warnings: Graphic Slash fic named for a Britney Spears song. Yes, you read that right. Disclaimer: I do not own Gossip Girl, or any of its characters. They belong to the CW and other people. No

Comments

[its_dare]

oooh, pretty o: i loved it

Sequel posted

[homicidalslayer]

http://homicidalslayer.livejournal.com/3959.html

[berlake]

very nice, but to be honest, the a/ns in there kind of threw me off.

[homicidalslayer]

Sorry they threw you off. I just really like doing that. It's kind of my thing.

Thanks for the comment

[ammonite7]

I wondered if those first couple Chuck's "sweet" were on purpose. Very clever.

I thought the A/Ns were fun, only perhaps leave the A/N part off and just put them in parens.

Love the interruptions, made it more dramatic. Like my porn with a bit of story like that, otherwise, what makes it different or interesting?

Also, their separate personalities need to show through. Wasn't quite as strong in that direction, but pretty good.

All-in-all, rather fun.

[homicidalslayer]

Thanks for the review, the advice, and for pointing out the "sweets." No, they weren't intentional, I was just over-caffeinated. Although, now that I think about it, it would have been kind of cute if they were. But no, I fixed them.

Again, thanks for commenting, glad you liked it, part three is in the mix.

[dragondie]

A very sensual and decedent addition to a lovely tale. Can't wait for part 3!

Sequel posted

[homicidalslayer]

http://homicidalslayer.livejournal.com/3959.html

[homicidalslayer]

this is also posted on FFN, with the little bars keeping the Author's notes separate from the rest of the story. Probably easier to skip over. look for it under mOBSCENE.