Okay, I am literally crying right now. Like physical tears are actually falling from my eyes and hitting this keyboard I'm typing on. No kidding. This has never happened before.. I don't cry for fictional stories! And yet, here I am.
That was soooooo sad. And yet, so beautiful~ Very, very, very good!
It doesn't sound weird (okay, maybe just a little^^), but I totally understand. Just like I said it was so sad, but yet, so beautiful.
This is just written so... perfectly. That's why it's added to my memories~
And, btw, I re-read this this afternoon and, once again, I cried. Even though I knew what was going to happen this time! lol I think I've figured out that it's four lines that really do me in:
After tonight, Heechul will never forgive himself.
Donghae looks at you, and you finally see him. You can see the sadness in his eyes. If you dig deep enough, you can see the understanding, too. He knows. Always the perceptive one.
Your eyes flicker. You want to say so much, but you can’t.
You close your eyes and let out the breath you’ve been holding for oh so long.
That last one.. that's when the tears overflow the brims of my eyes~
ahaha you cried again TT____TT its sad, but amusing at the same time. (again, not making sense. xD curse my inarticulacy*.)
i love that heechul line, too, because its subtle foreshadowing. and im terrible at subtle foreshadowing. and the perceptive line, with donghae. ahaha im so biased. its so obvious. but he is, he's ditzy but he's attentive, you know?
That was soooooo sad. And yet, so beautiful~
Very, very, very good!
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i've gotta say, you crying at my fic has made my life complete. TT__TT
im...really happy that you are
and really sorry at the same time XD
i know that sounds weird.
but....just....thank you.
so much.
♥
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This is just written so... perfectly.
That's why it's added to my memories~
And, btw, I re-read this this afternoon and, once again, I cried. Even though I knew what was going to happen this time! lol
I think I've figured out that it's four lines that really do me in:
After tonight, Heechul will never forgive himself.
Donghae looks at you, and you finally see him. You can see the sadness in his eyes. If you dig deep enough, you can see the understanding, too. He knows. Always the perceptive one.
Your eyes flicker. You want to say so much, but you can’t.
You close your eyes and let out the breath you’ve been holding for oh so long.
That last one.. that's when the tears overflow the brims of my eyes~
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i love u.
ahaha you cried again TT____TT
its sad, but amusing at the same time.
(again, not making sense. xD curse my inarticulacy*.)
i love that heechul line, too, because its subtle foreshadowing.
and im terrible at subtle foreshadowing.
and the perceptive line, with donghae. ahaha im so biased. its so obvious.
but he is, he's ditzy but he's attentive, you know?
lol i love that you love this fic ♥
P.S.*i dont know if thats even a word
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And I love you too~ lol <333333
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