Sundown, Sunup (Lavender/Parvati, PG)

Feb 07, 2012 13:41

Title: Sundown, Sunup
Pairing: Lavender/Parvati
Rating: PG
rarepair_shorts prompt: 6. I can't leave it all behind (My table)
Word count: ~1,400
Summary: Lavender never expected it to go as badly as it had.

Sundown, Sunup )

hp, rating: pg, rarepair_shorts, fic, pairing: lavender/parvati, femmeslash

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musicffyou February 7 2012, 15:15:29 UTC
Lav/Vati may start to become my favorite femslash pairing because the writers are just amazing. Thanks for uploading! I've never read a fic where Padma wasn't supportive but I like the bit about the difference between houses and how that translated into real life situations.

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holyfant February 9 2012, 11:34:45 UTC
Thank you very much for reading! I don't think that Padma would be unsupportive, in the end, but I can kind of see her reserving judgment for a moment and that's kind of the idea I was playing with. Glad you liked it :)

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bluemermaid February 7 2012, 16:11:54 UTC
Oh, this is really sad. I don't even know what to say, your writing is so amazing. I really love this look into Parvati's family, and the lives she has, the different sides of her reality. The emotions, the depressing heartache just feels very real.

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holyfant February 9 2012, 11:35:03 UTC
Thank you so much <3

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magic_knickers February 7 2012, 22:48:53 UTC
This is beautiful, really. Their relationship is so solid and lovely, and you conveyed that in such short words. I love that you really heavily incorporated Parvati's Indian background and the differences between Hogwarts houses. It added a certain depth to the fic that I often find such short pieces lacking. Lovely job!

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holyfant February 9 2012, 11:35:35 UTC
Thank you! I'm very happy to hear that despite the shortness you felt like it wasn't too shallow.

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