Good morning - Let's make this week better!

[holycitygirl]

Today is going to be all about resistance. The muse wants - nay needs - Entourage fic. *sigh* Just what the doctor ordered, another fandom, more slashy boys dividing my attention

Comments

[inthekeyofd]

They're in his room now...DAMN, fun shall be ensuing, oh yes it will!!! That kiss, THAT KISS, I don't blame Jack, Sawyer has the power of wiping all higher brain functions away.

I'm loving how you've incorporated all the characters too..can't wait for the next chapter.

[holycitygirl]

It's Lost High! It's like Sweet Valley with tats and drug use. Yes!

And no I'm not on drugs myself.

Next chapter - action! if not total porn.

And then I swear I'm taking on sub-plots. There's gonna be some Shannon sticking notes in lockers and telling Sawyer that Jack made fun of him in American History.

Lol. OH GOD somebody stop me!

[siluria]

Why the hell would we want to stop you???? ;)

[holycitygirl]

Are you angling for another flower?

[astra2104]

You're doing this on purpose, right?I mean, you've probably already written the fifth part and just decide, with the sadistic part of your brain, that you might as well stop right before the porn. Just give a bit of teaser and then leave. That's really, really mean *pouts*

You can't do this! I WANT PORN! *has huge hissy fit*

Please?

[holycitygirl]

Lol.! *gasps at accusation*

I would NEVER!

*storms around the room in outrage*

:(

OOoookay maybe I would. But I didn't. It's not written I promise. It will be very soon I promise harder.

Besides I need Sawyer POV for the porn - everybody knows that.

[foxxcub]

About bloody time, LOL! :D :D

[holycitygirl]

Lol. Are you channeling Charlie?

*stands guilty as charged*

You are right, yes yes, I know.

[halfdutch]

Yaaay! Makeout session! Wooo! ;-) Or, at least the start of one! V. nice!

[holycitygirl]

I'm tempted to have Locke the Janitor interrupt them but I'm afraid you'd all kill me if I did that.

*fears the wrath of a pornless Chapter 5*

:) Glad you liked babe!

[elise_509]

oh, you tease. ;) cut away to commercial break just when the good stuff gets going. not fair!

but i loved this. i loved charlie worrying over sawyer's interest in Jack and Sawyer showing up in chapel. Sawyer and Charlie's interactions there in that moment were really funny. And then Jack and Sawyer skip first and go to his room. Who doesn't like that? (the descriptions of hurley's side of the room and jack's side were so right on. reminded me of my dorm room in college - i was the painfully neat side.)

I'm glad you're gonna keep writing this! I'll keep begging you for more anyway *begs*

*loves you*

[holycitygirl]

We are Jack girls so OF COURSE you were the painfully neat side (wanna see pics of MY room now?)

I'm glad you are enjoying it babe, even as I tease the hell out of you and draaaaaag it out.

*loves you back*