Sherlock's discovery of the relationship is delicious. Lestrade's tongue comment nearly had me exclaiming with glee in an inappropriate time/place. Your description of Mycroft's scent makes me want to buy it bottled. And I love how vocal Mycroft was during sex--he's always so tight-lipped, it's good to see him let loose.
This is absolutely WONDERFUL! :-D I've been reading it obsessively since this afternoon, knowing I wouldn't be able to go to bed until I'd finished it. I'm going to add this to my Pinboard bookmarks (as soon as the author is revealed) and will probably rec the story on my LJ.
There are so many brilliant lines that I can't choose a favourite. I just have to say that all of the dialogue is fantastic. I admire the way you're able to keep Lestrade and Mycroft in character and, yet, reveal some truly humourous moments between them. I love how bitchy Lestrade is a lot of the time. I thought it was hilarious when he fell asleep again after that extremely early morning phone call, only to have Mycroft break into his place and wake him up in person. Oh, and I'm repeating what other people have said, but Sherlock's reaction to the whole Mycroft/Lestrade relationship revelation is priceless. *g*
Before I forget, kudos for all the canon references you worked into the story. I especially like your take on "The Greek Interpreter".
Wowwee! All that UST paid off big time with such passionate coupling (or rubbing, to be precise, lol), and depth of feeling. I really love all the dialog and confrontation. Such a great read, and I only love Mystrade more with every addition to this ship as good as this. Love the lovely little bits of Johnlock in the back ground, and the reveal to them both at the end, lol. "OH GOD!" LMAO I can almost literally hear that in my head. XD Lovely and hot read!
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Sherlock's discovery of the relationship is delicious. Lestrade's tongue comment nearly had me exclaiming with glee in an inappropriate time/place. Your description of Mycroft's scent makes me want to buy it bottled. And I love how vocal Mycroft was during sex--he's always so tight-lipped, it's good to see him let loose.
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There are so many brilliant lines that I can't choose a favourite. I just have to say that all of the dialogue is fantastic. I admire the way you're able to keep Lestrade and Mycroft in character and, yet, reveal some truly humourous moments between them. I love how bitchy Lestrade is a lot of the time. I thought it was hilarious when he fell asleep again after that extremely early morning phone call, only to have Mycroft break into his place and wake him up in person. Oh, and I'm repeating what other people have said, but Sherlock's reaction to the whole Mycroft/Lestrade relationship revelation is priceless. *g*
Before I forget, kudos for all the canon references you worked into the story. I especially like your take on "The Greek Interpreter".
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Love the lovely little bits of Johnlock in the back ground, and the reveal to them both at the end, lol. "OH GOD!" LMAO I can almost literally hear that in my head. XD Lovely and hot read!
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