Dean/Castiel Fic: Bad Things With You

[hollycomb]

I guess I'll go ahead and throw my Dean/Castiel fic into the ring along with everyone else. I was going to wait until I'd seen one more episode with him, but then I liked the idea of a fic based off of only the very initial impressions.

Title: Bad Things With You
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: For 4.01
Summary:

Comments

[zelda_zee]

Wow, this is like a wish come true! Didn't I say I couldn't wait til you started writing SPN fic? And god, this pairing - I LOVE the way you write it! Your Castiel is so perfect. I'm completely in love with him!

There's a whole lot of good going around, and Dean isn't sold on any of it.

This is so perfectly Dean.

I love the relationship between them, the everydayness of it, despite the fact that Dean can't deny that Castiel is at the least a powerful being. His insistence on trying to prove that Castiel isn't good, love that. And Castiel is so solid, except when his reaction to touching Dean shakes him. Gorgeous sex, scorching hot. Mmm, I want more of it!

The alienation between Sam and Dean was painful. I can imagine canon possibly going in this direction, and the mere idea of it hurts. Sam and Dean each hunting with their supernatural partners is a strange, symmetrical idea. It works, but it's hard to take.

I really loved your description of Castiel looking at Ruby like a falcon eying a mole. I would love to get to see that side of him.

Wonderful fic! I loved reading it!

[hollycomb]

Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! This was my first SPN fic, and I didn't expect it to come so easily. I was just going to jot down a few paragraphs for a future idea, but once I got started I couldn't stop. These two are too much fun to write. I'm glad you liked my version of Castiel -- I wanted to put it out there before the show gives him more of a personality, heh!

Everydayness is my thing, and I especially love to write it when there's some bizarro element like an angel trying to act like a human. And Dean is so going to doubt the validity of this angel thing for most of the season, right?!

I'm always glad to hear the sex scenes were effective -- I write them at work in between phone calls and filing; they keep me sane/just insane enough.

I honestly wasn't sure how the whole Sam/Dean thing would come off, because for some reason I can't write Sam? But anyway, yeah, it'll be interesting to see what actually happens between the two of them this season . . .

Thanks again for the comments, I really appreciate it. :)

[zelda_zee]

Sam is hard to write! Dean's personality is so big and he's such an extrovert and Sam is an introvert and so much of what goes on with him happens on the inside. I find writing Dean almost like writing Sawyer in that I can hear him in my head, loud and clear, whereas Sam is like this tiny, indistinct whisper. Of course, I haven't written either of them very much, but that could be changing soon.

Anyhoo, wonderful fic that I shall squeefully rec in my next post. Gotta be sure all the Lost/SPN girls catch it!