Comments | hollycomb: fashionably late to the party

hollycomb

fashionably late to the party

May 27, 2008 18:56

Happy Birthday, bryoneybrynn!! Here is this crazy camping fic thing; I hope it is still the 27th where you are, and that you're having an awesome day! :)

Title: Marshmallows and Rain (And Other Things That Don't Mix Well)
Author: hollycomb
Pairing: Albus/Scorpius
Rating: R
Notes: Written for bryoneybrynn, with her prompt, "Just shut up and eat it."

( Bringing the Malfoys camping is easily the worst idea Albus has ever had. )

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hollycomb May 28 2008, 02:41:40 UTC

Thanks! I was going to do a demure, dorky Scorpius in this, but then he just turned snarky on me without warning. ;)

bryoneybrynn May 28 2008, 00:24:52 UTC

*is dead, having died about three lines in*

Warning: Have quoted entire story back to you below

OMFG, that was beyond words. I adore you! Adore! Anything you want, name it and I'll give it to you! *hugs you an inappropriate amount and rubs up on you just a little*

I don't even know where to begin. Harry and Draco cracked me up. The fighting, the not so discreet alone time, the getting drunk and arguing and falling asleep by the fire. Harry being happy in a way he hasn't been for a long time. *sighs* And then there was this: a pair of sleeping bags that look as if they've already been slept in, or actually more like a pair of wild boars has been wrestling on them. Hee!!

And Al! Oh!! God, he was just gorgeousness.

This: Albus wants to fight, which is unusual for him, but it feels good, like something he needs to get out of his system, and he likes the weight of Scorpius on top of him, the sky blackening over his shoulders as the thunder rolls closer, a storm coming in fast.

And this: Albus falls onto him fully, hadn't realized ( ... )

hollycomb May 28 2008, 02:40:23 UTC

Oh, yay! I'm so glad you liked it! I was powering through the first half, but on the second half I started to get nervous about a few things, so I'm glad it all worked out. This was the first time I've written Albus the Jock, and the first time I've written even subtly implied Harry/Draco, so I'm thrilled that you liked it. Happy Birthday!!! :D :D

ura_hd May 28 2008, 01:25:23 UTC

Brilliant story! I think you have a real talent for Albus/Scorpius pairing. You should write more of this kind.

hollycomb May 28 2008, 02:41:04 UTC

Thanks so much! I'd love to write more of them; the prompts help. ;)

abusing_sarcasm May 28 2008, 06:54:41 UTC

OMG!!!!

*dies*

This? This is why you're one of my favorite AS/S authors EVER!

*hugs you super-tightly and fangirls all over you*

*dies again*

hollycomb May 28 2008, 13:03:43 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :D

kurla88 May 29 2008, 00:54:55 UTC

Cute! I love the whole "Muggle Day" concept. I love how Draco is totally wrapped around Scorpius' little finger and the TENT DISAPPEARING omg. XD XD And Harry knowing that Albus hates Muggle Day, of course he does. Lol, silly people who underestimate daddies.

"At least let me heal it with magic," Scorpius says. "Enough of this Muggle nonsense."

"A bandage will suffice," Scorpius says.

Was one of those supposed to be a Draco? ;) And I think I saw a "Scorpis" in there somewhere...

I miss This Year's Love so much! :O Maybe I should try reading your Lost-fic.

hollycomb May 29 2008, 01:39:55 UTC

Thanks so much! And that was supposed to be a Draco in the first line of dialogue you mentioned, thank you for catching that!! Seems like no matter how many times I proof it, a little typo slips by.

Do try the Lost fic! I've heard it's a pleasant surprise, given the pairing. ;D