We See Through

[hollowfyre]

I wrote this a couple of months ago. I have never shared it with anyone, but it fits my mood at the moment. Please let me know what you think.

We see through

We see through the lies

And we see through the games

We see through to the weakness

And see through to the shame

Spinning and twisting

Crumpled and then torn apart

To bad there was just a void

Comments

[roseblessing]

The main reaction that I have is that this expresses your true feelings- in other words it rings true.

I just want to remind you that when you see through someone's deception like that, there's still a whole lot you can't see about them.

[hollowfyre]

Thats true. There will always be things I never see about who she really is. The difference is, now I have no desire to try