The Proper-False (Part four, PG-13, 1373 words)

[lilian_cho]

Title: The Proper-False
Author: lilian_cho
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Original
Pairing: future Adrien/Nicholas
Wordcount: 1373
Warnings: Harlequinesque plot. Two guys having conversations over cakes and hot chocolates. Don't read this when you're hungry.
Bonus: "Nine creative uses of whipped cream" by Nicholas Goh, age 7 3/4 and Nicholas Goh's Top Five Favorite

Comments

[mechante_fille]

Oh, they are adorable! Both of them. Mmm, I'm tempted to grab the Mexican chocolate out of the cupboard... but then, I don't actually have milk right now. Bummer. I do, however, have pie!

[lilian_cho]

Thank you =D

PIE OM NOM NOM.

My bar of Mexican chocolate has tiny nibble marks to the side, hahaha. I kept on meaning to make hot chocolate, but ended up finishing the milk instead =P

FYI there are tiny bonuses on top. Should've linked to the entry instead of the cut tag. Also, part five hopefully will be posted by Tuesday (I have an exam that day, so). =)

[charisstoma]

Adrien is trying to maintain some distance between them here yet? He missed the 'put both cakes on one plate and hand out 2 forks to companionably and romantically savor the food' with optional 'try this instead' fork to other person's mouth by Nicholas.

I am wondering about Adrien's family that they are going to quiz Nicholas about what it's like to shower in an en suite bathroom.
Question: en suite bathrooms by definition are bathrooms that are accessed from the bedroom. Since the other bedrooms have their own bathrooms, they are also en suite or does this mean it has a tub as well as a shower.

Have you seen the Bodyspa systems like Bodyspa?

[charisstoma]

I did forget to mention that I loved this. *SMILES* This is all foreplay, restrained foreplay but foreplay none the less.
Adrien's reaction to Nicholas stretching and mention of 'wearing the boyfriend's shirt to bed' in place of pajamas *GRINS* or maybe it was the image of Nicholas naked in bed that did that or all of the above. *grinsgrinsgrins*

long reply is long (LJ, don't fail me now)

[lilian_cho]

Just wanted to say that I do have tiny bonuses on top. Should've linked to the entry instead of the cut tag.

Adrien is a bit squicked irked by non-kissing/sex-related saliva exchange. Once he'd swapped saliva half-a-dozen times or so he'd lose his hang-up. Possibly. Nicholas, on the other hand, would eat off of his mom's plate, Irene's plate, Maureen's plate, Sam's plate...but not Conner's plate because his boyfriend is an ashtray mouth.

<-- Possibly they will have a Conversation about this in the future.

Extraneous info: the penthouse has three bedrooms (one master bedroom and two bedrooms) and three bathrooms [one ensuite bathroom (separate shower and tub) in the master bathroom, guest bathroom A (tub with a showerhead) and guest bathroom B (shower, toilet and sink only)]. I'll...figure out how to clarify the ensuite bathroom question when I rewrite the whole thing.

If I'm any good at spatial arrangement/imagining, I would draw the layout and post it at proper_false. I tried basing it on real floor plans at first, but American penthouse

Re: long reply is long (LJ, don't fail me now)

[lilian_cho]

your second* comment. *headdesk*

When I post my comment, your second comment is _above_ my reply. Yes.

[charisstoma]

*grins*
[quote]Adrien is a bit squicked irked by non-kissing/sex-related saliva exchange. Once he'd swapped saliva half-a-dozen times or so he'd lose his hang-up. Possibly.[/quote]

If Adrien wanted to present this is my lover and we've been together for a while, he better push to over come this phobia/irkedness. Lover's share spit ALLLLLL the time. *snickers*

I have seen on television large glass walled showers with many showerheads coming out from various walls of the shower so that there's no problem being cut off from the spray if there's more than one person taking a shower. It's sort of a surround shower, not necessarily high tech but allows for two to shower at once *smiles* bonus points if the walls are mirrors and yes, I saw one of those too. Person wanted to see himself while showering; so many possibilities with that.

[lilian_cho]

that they are going to quiz Nicholas about what it's like to shower in an en suite bathroom.

Adrien was just making up excuses to get Nicholas inside his bedroom. Adrien's parents are normal people. His younger brother and little cousin...debatable, but probably not as crazy as Nicholas' cousins. Probably.

Lover's share spit ALLLLLL the time.

AUGHhhh don't gross me out. I half-kid.
I feel a bit bad that nobody's jumped anyone yet. Just a bit. Kiss the girl boy, Adrien!

It's sort of a surround shower

That sounds comical and awesome at the same time! =D

Person wanted to see himself while showering

This reminds me of Christian Bale in American Psycho, whyyyyy. T_T
I kinda overdosed on mirror!sex and shower!sex reading Boys' Love manga. Those two are like, two of the most common kinks in BL. IDK if I'll ever write such a scene. The whole describing which limb goes where sounds difficult...

Thanks again for the long comments!

Part five is up.

[jayanx]

Adrien's reaction to sharing food makes me smile, my friends and family don't have that hang up (I remember reading about second hand kisses from soda can and my best friend and I figuring out we've vicariously made out with most of the people we know), so it always makes me giggle a little when I meet people who are really sort of icked out by it. If they are going to be the believable lovey dovey couple it sounds like Adrien's going to have to unbend just a bit, especially if he wants people to believe that he's dating a guy like Nicholas.

I love how Nicholas was talking to the marshmallows, I don't know anyone *me cough* who does things like that.

[lilian_cho]

my best friend and I figuring out we've vicariously made out with most of the people we know

X-D

I have that hang-up selectively. Immediate family is a-okay, but friends eating from the same plate is a bit... IDK I also feel that it's a bit rude?

especially if he wants people to believe that he's dating a guy like Nicholas

*g* *g* *g*

On the other end of the spectrum is people who won't eat food with any hint that it came from something alive (i.e. whole fish), ahaha.

Thanks for commenting, glad you enjoyed it =D

Part five is up.

[jayanx]

I can see that depending on how well you know the person, it drives me nuts when people don't ask first with rare exceptions.

[lilian_cho]

I meant rude of me. In general my high school friends are more fastidious and polite than I am, haha.

My friends were always shocked when they hear me talk to my parents (mom, esp.) as if they're my social equal. (My brothers and I use the rude term of "I" and "you" instead of the polite term with them.)

It's interesting coming to the U.S. where people for the most part have less personal boundaries than I do. Physical-wise, that is. ("Don't burst my personal bubble! You're standing too close!")

[newtypeshadow]

So cute! I love that Adrien was totally checking Nicholas out when he stretched (don't tell me he wasn't!), and that Nicholas sweet-talks his food (too). I giggled insanely about Nicholas's two-timing with pocky ways. ^_^ I look forward to the next episode in their adventures!

[lilian_cho]

;-)

Mmm, Nicholas hasn't demonstrated his sweet-talking skills huh? Not that Adrien needs to be sweet-talked.

Thanks for commenting, glad it entertained =D

Part five is up.