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Oct 19, 2006 22:45

Title: Bad Habits
Characters: T-Bag/Other
Rating: PG13
Warnings: Swearing
Author's notes: Almost a drabble really except it's too long to be a drabble. I didn't spend a lot of time on this one, but I enjoy it!

T-Bag had been driving non-stop for five hours when he finally decided that he needed to take a break. It was getting dark and ( Read more... )

Comments 12

bottledshapes September 20 2006, 06:36:02 UTC

Ohhhh naughty *giggles*
i like it! a lot! :]

bluefroggy84 September 20 2006, 19:16:07 UTC

Hehe, thank you!

artsy_fish September 20 2006, 14:06:52 UTC

"Consider it your lucky day." There's a line to send shivers running through ya, in a good way or a bad way is anybody's interpretation. Very well written. Had me on tenterhooks thinking 'OMG! WHAT'S HE GOING TO DO TO HER?!?!?!' and then... Smoking!T-Bag XD

Reminds me, I need one... busy day. Any excuse to run outside for some 'fresh' air.

Love it!

bluefroggy84 September 20 2006, 19:17:01 UTC

Don't take me the wrong way, I don't condone or encourage smoking among my readers! :P Glad you enjoyed it though!!

artsy_fish September 20 2006, 20:32:45 UTC

And rightly so. I don't encourage people to do it... ever. It's all down to the decision of the individual. And this individual has decided to stop by the age of 25... or else.

I haven't figured out what the or else is yet... it might have something to do with tar, feathers and public humiliation though. Think that's incentive enough to quit. The gum doesn't work anyways.

*sigh* twenty-five...

Anyhow, yes, yes I did enjoy it. Smoking or no. He could be giving into his cravings for... Pokémon card trading or something. That'd get him nearer small children... so wrong... yet, Nerdy Pokémon Loving Theodore - WITH NERDY GLASSES! XD - is a strangely wonderful image.

kittenwigirl September 20 2006, 14:34:27 UTC

Ooooh. Definitely not what I expected. =D
And I love the line "I'm officially in butt-fuck nowhere."
Brilliant story!

bluefroggy84 September 20 2006, 19:17:31 UTC

thanks!! :D

kittenwigirl September 20 2006, 19:35:48 UTC

You're welcome! ^^

niektete September 20 2006, 18:32:46 UTC

Ah hah hah hah! XD giggle giggle giggle; hilarious! But ooooh, T-Bag smoking... "Consider it your lucky day." Yum.

bluefroggy84 September 20 2006, 19:18:17 UTC

I love writing good lines for T-Bag. It's fun!

jcfreakish September 20 2006, 21:04:45 UTC

That's great! Nice, short, to the point, but detailed.
T-Bag wasn’t a regular smoker by any means, but he knew he looked good doing it.
God I think that's true! Wouldn't he just look too damn sexy with a cigarette?
And lucky day comment, just plain creepy, but in a goode, T-Bag kinhda way. Nice fic!