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(poem fragment)
Dec 08, 2011 22:48
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the9trances
December 9 2011, 07:30:57 UTC
Intensity.
I didn't know/had forgotten/causality looped out that you wrote poetry. It's excellent. Dense, thick, chewy, and ornate.
But, at least out of context, the name's a bit... much.
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hogofheaven
December 12 2011, 00:31:38 UTC
Thanks for the feedback.
Context = "vengeful destruction" is how Wikipedia translates the name Tisiphone, who is one of the Furies. The other two sections will have similar names: "the grudging" and "the unknowable."
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silentplaces
December 13 2011, 08:24:18 UTC
Wow. You have my undivided attention. Pray continue.
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I didn't know/had forgotten/causality looped out that you wrote poetry. It's excellent. Dense, thick, chewy, and ornate.
But, at least out of context, the name's a bit... much.
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Context = "vengeful destruction" is how Wikipedia translates the name Tisiphone, who is one of the Furies. The other two sections will have similar names: "the grudging" and "the unknowable."
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