Comments | hobgoblinn: Fic: Lost Boys, 5/14 - Conversations with the Dead, Part 1 (Harry Potter)

hobgoblinn

Fic: Lost Boys, 5/14 - Conversations with the Dead, Part 1 (Harry Potter)

Oct 15, 2007 00:01

Prologue - Two Dads
Part 1 - Visions of the Afterlife
Part 2 - Little Boy Lost
Part 3 - Detention
Part 4 - An Intruder

Title: Lost Boys, 5/14 - Conversations with the Dead, Part 1
Rating: FRT (PG)
Distribution: Sure. Let me know where it’s going. Written for the snape_after_dh ficathon ( Read more... )

snape, fic, lost boys, snape_after_dh

Comments 3

very moving chapter wynnleaf October 29 2007, 19:40:40 UTC

I saw this mentioned on Loose Canon as well as Whitehound's recs, so came over to read. I love the story so far. I'm not sure why, but this chapter is very moving to me. I very rarely cry in a story, but found myself almost ready to over Snape and David Dursley's conversation.

Re: very moving chapter hobgoblinn October 29 2007, 20:55:36 UTC

Thank you so much. I was really hoping this chapter would do that. Hope you enjoy the rest. I must say it's very cool to get feedback on an isolated part like this and reread it now, when I have the end of the story in mind but also have a little distance. So, thanks for that, as well.

firefly124 October 14 2008, 12:18:07 UTC

“How fortunate for you, then, that idiocy is the natural state of the adolescent wizard,” the ghost replied. “You’ll fit right in with all the other equally idiotic boys your age. I expect girls find it very hard to distinguish between any of you.”

LOL!! That's so very Snapish and so very true!

The ghost felt a dizzying cascade of images, horrors. Things he had seen and done, long ago.

Oh no! As much as part of me wants to see him regain his identity, it's so sad to see him getting these bits back. His advice to David is very wise, though.