Hey everyone! This is my first post here, having signed up today.
I'm writing to suggest my own fanfiction for your reading pleasure. At 3 chapters long so far, it is about 7,500 words. I'm enjoying writing it, but some constructive criticism from Honks afficianado's would be welcome. Feel free to review/comment on here or on fanfiction.net, whichever suits you; it is after all your prerogative.
Although the first chapter lacks double spacing, please forge ahead, as the fic is double spaced in chapters 2 and 3.
The fiction is a Fem Harry\Tonks fic.
http://m.fanfiction.net/s/7665818/1/ I hope you all enjoy it, I look forward to reading any comments you might have!