Concrit Post 9

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[fellinavolcano]

Why not? All input from nitpicks to general RP concerns appreciated!

bubblevoid
Roxas (AU) | Kingdom Hearts | inarticulated

polychromatic
Sync the Tempest | Tales of the Abyss | fellinavolcano
Tyki Mikk | D.Gray-Man | onlyteasing
Roxas | Kingdom Hearts | obliviomancy

HOMELESS (but in case anybody has tips)
Asch the Bloody | Tales of the Abyss | encendres
Monica Argento | Trinity Blood | traumatises
Oz Vessalius | Pandora Hearts | warping

[allmoveone]

I only know PH aah. But I like your Oz (the one thread I've had with him). I can't say I have any specific concrit for him other than play him more so you settle a bit? Because in the dear_mun post I tagged, some of the way you phrased things felt a bit strange, but as the thread progressed, you definitely seemed to settle into his character.

I think that you could be a really good Oz.

[warping]

Oz is a bit odd for me, so yeah, I could definitely use the practice. I'll spend the month tossing him around and seeing what works. Thanks. ♥

[xukty]

Roxaaaaas. You know I stalk both him and Tyki, right? 8|

I, um, fail at giving good concrit especially since I haven't been following as closely as I ought to, but I really like the way you handle the two of them. Especially Roxas, since him I've interacted with - the threads are enjoyable, even though sometimes I get confused with how you phrase some things (hence taglag and sometimes threaddropping. I'm sorry! >>;)

Also HWAT you play Oz somewhere. Why didn't you tell me?

[obliviomancy]

You could've mentioned that! >: What things, so that I can keep an eye out for them in the future?

Haha, I don't play Oz anywhere, he's homeless for a reason! I just wanted tips. |D

[xukty]

I know, I should have, but I didn't. >>; I'm sorry. Umm. Well, I fail at giving good examples, but maybe it's just me being tired or fail or whatever when catching tags but sometimes you phrase your sayings so... weirdly it's hard for me to keep up (because no matter how good I am at it, English is never going to be my first language. Idk if that is really the cause, but I assume so.)

But you have a journal for him!

[obliviomancy]

I've been known to be a tad esoteric and... with two comments in a row about how I phrase my comments, I really doubt it's just you. For obvious reasons, I don't see it myself, though. So if you ever go back and read over our threads and run into an example, please email me a link so that I can try and fix it? :>

Yeah, I tossed him around a dressing room and a spam post and was hoping that someone out there'd seen enough to give me advice! Nothing serious, really.

[xukty]

I shall! I rarely go back and read my old threads, though - they make me feel awkward because I think I could've been waaaay better when playing this and that and oh dear. >>;

Join the PHDR. :< ...I should too sadsaff. I still kind of want to join Poly crew.

[obliviomancy]

Ahahaha, I'm that way with my really old threads too. Well, since I'm not going to stop threading with you, feel free to ping me anytime when I'm unclear! Email, AIM, whatever.

I willl... once I re-read. Again. It's a prose DR, which means I have to think everything over so much more! And yesss, you should app into Poly's. Who'd you narrow your choices down to? :>

[xukty]

Sure! And stop being slef-conscious about my english. fff.

I'm not used to prose style either, but I guess it's not that bad. And ummmm. Reo and Liam (I refuse to spell it Reim 8|) and... well I figured that what the hell, someone like Ada or Echo or Sharon couldn't hurt, I could do any of them and like it.

But asadg:dfh school! School! School!! /runs

[obliviomancy]

I really never would've known about your English if you hadn't told me.

Oooh, app Reo. Reo! Someone to harass and block Eliot would be awesome and I know that they definitely want one. I'd try and make you icons too if you wanted! \o\

Fff, go to school, you. xD

[xukty]

... sure I've told you before that I'm Finnish? *just making sure*

I knew you'd say that 8) If I app, then most possibly it's him although now that I think of it, Ada is really intriguing too but I already have a pretty gentle girl who looks good in pink 8| And unf, icons! ♥ I'll probably make them myself but hey, more PH icons love is always appreciated.

I diiiiid. And now I'm back. Thank heavens for short wednesday...