Concrit Post 9

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

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Comments

[championship]

a_trialbyfire
Dawn | Pokemon, games | trainer_dawn
Nina Wyndia | Breath of Fire 2 | erasedroyalty

amatomnes
Caster | Fate/Stay Night | meteor_witch
Sapphire Birch | Pokemon Special | naturalsapphire

microcosm_rp
Caster | Fate/Stay Night | meteor_witch

[magicnme]

Dawn is a really delightful Canon OC, I've really enjoyed her in the game. I'd like to see a little more of her regular shenanigans with the Pokemon, but you do a really great job of tagging around with her and keeping her connected and friendly.

Nina could use a little more attention tagging other journals, but it feels like you get more confident with her as you go. I suggest trying to find a niche for her in World's End that isn't necessary tied to her canonmate, so she has another area of involvement? Give her something to do regularly in the city.

[championship]

Thanks! ♥ Haha, I just got the terrible mental image of Dawn taking her Pokemon out for them to feed themselves. And then feeling decidedly unwell.

Yeah, I'm trying to branch out with Nina more... I'm not quite sure what she'd do, though. POSSIBLY HELP OUT AT THE HOSPITAL man I need to stop being lazy. orz

[newcenturysace]

I wish I was more familiar with the canon for either of your characters. But I enjoy their interactions a lot! I especially love picking on Sapphire with Ash... XD

[fieldofblades]

I just want to say that considering the point you pulled her from, I love your Caster in Micro ♥