Concrit Post 2

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?∞ comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from

Comments

[hotandcoldrp]

Criiiiiiiiiiiiiit. Critcritcritcritcrit.

@ dear_multiverse
sycophanticdick- PFC Dick Simmons from Red vs. Blue
untilitisnomore- The Director from Red vs. Blue

@ memento_eden
a_scented_blade- Tsubaki Nakatsukasa from Soul Eater
semper_fi_bitch- Sgt. Dexter Grif from Red vs. Blue

And as weird as this request may seem, I would love it if anybody familiar with Order of the Stick could take a look at this musebox post and tell me how my Redcloak characterization is, I would love them forever, seriously.

[el_hustino]

I can't think of anything to criticize you about!

[hotandcoldrp]

Try harder. B|

[el_hustino]

Etna dislikes Tsubaki for being tall and curvy.

Am I doing it right?

[hotandcoldrp]

Tsubaki will try to be smaller and flatter for Etna! D:

[el_hustino]

Very good! She'll get a raise if she accomplishes that successfully.

[flonnezilla]

I haven't interacted with your characters much, but! Grif is funny and a believable douche.

[rinnington]

Uuum...I'm actually pretty bad of these! Besides, you're doing Tsubaki really well, and she's the only one I know. Maybe post moar? Though I can see why that would be hard with someone as soft spoken as Tsubaki.

[hotandcoldrp]

Ahah, yes, I am working on moar activity from Tsubaki, now that I've gotten over the "oh god I'm playing a nice character now what the heck is this how do I do it" bump.