Crit Post 25

[hmd_me]

Remember, save the circle-jerking spam for love memes. If you want to tell someone "omg ilu bb," take a few seconds to think of a reason why. Also, if you comment, try critting/giving a constructive compliment to someone else. Pass it forward!

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[nicepartner]

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ash ketchum | nicepartner
gotta catch 'em all
post diamond and pearl
✓I have his basic voice down, and I've rewatched a lot of the Diamond and Pearl anime series to know that I'm doing okay.
✖ Not spending enough time with castmates. He hasn't talked to any of his friends from back home often enough, or even with any of the ones that are here.
✖ He doesn't know any of his roommates, besides Ryohei. He definitely needs to meet more of them.


haruhi suzumiya | autoevolution
god doesn't know
post disappearance
✓At Splendor, personally - I love her excitement over people having powers and the talking ponies too!
✖ I haven't been tagging around with Haruhi often. She still needs to meet her roommates.
✖ Sometimes, I think that Haruhi's 'eccentric' part of her is too much.

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ange ushiromiya | usedpiece
my family always dies
EP4; "alliance of the golden witch"
✖ I don't feel like I have her voice down at all.
✖ Ange needs to know more people, though I doubt it will happen any time soon.


haruhi suzumiya | autoevolution
god doesn't know
post disappearance
✓ I think that once she gets to Violet, more things will pipe up - she'll be more EXCITED and not as bored.
✖ Not enough boredom?
✖ I'm not in constant contact with canon mates, which makes traveling a bit more difficult.

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dawn | wonribbons
no need to worry
post SS024
✓ My second strongest muse besides Ash!
✖ Too Mary Sue-ish, sometimes.
✖ Using Piplup too much?

Also, all journals have anon-enabled, comments screened, and IP logging off HMDs in their journals!

I'm mostly worried about Ange, because this is my first time playing her - as well as playing from a fandom that usually scares me.

ETA: CLAIMING FIRST IN THE NAME OF POKEMON!!!

[nicepartner]

This formatting is really obnoxious. hmd memes aren't a place to show off your special snowflake HTML skills.

[catchtheharp]

Well, sorry to say anon, I wasn't trying to show off my 'special snowflake' HTML skills - I was actually just playing around with HTML and someone told me that they liked this formatting so I just went with it. But seriously, you shouldn't have been so rude as to say this: the HMD meme is not for wanking about how someone formats their posts.

[nicepartner]

hello, my name is anon and i'm just jelly at how awesome this post looks. if i wasn't such a passive-aggressive asshole, i might have the courage to say something in person but nah. fuck that noise. i'm too cool for that. boy, you gotta love how classy us anons are.