Concrit Post 20

[hmd_me]

Getting things started a little early today! Enjoy.

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[gallantgoggles]

@Discedo

Takato Matsuda and Guilmon | Digimon Tamers | gallantgoggles

Danny Fenton | Danny Phantom | invisibill

Will Stanton | The Dark is Rising | beyondimagining

[fromacoldplace]

skdjfhadslkjfhakdsj I LOVE YOUR WILL.

I mean. I cannot really say anything about the others, since I don't know their canons, but Will is pure win, and I think that you play the Old One in him extremely well.

(Takato and Danny are nice to interact with is all that I can say about them.)

[gallantgoggles]

kagafshd! Thank you! I am so worried about getting his voice down, so its great to hear that someone thinks he's doing it right. I keep feeling like I'm making him sound too old when he's not actually showing his inner Old One. But its such a lyrical way of speaking he has that he sounds old in comparison to all the more relaxed characters even when he isn't actually using a very advanced vocabulary.

I'm hoping to start moving on getting Takato and Danny more involved soon. Now that Danny has his chip removed and Takato is trying to get Guilmon's chip removed there are all kinds of new opportunities coming up.

[whatisnarva]

*nod* I see what you mean, but... Maybe you'd get a better feeling for the "boy" side of him if you actively tried to seek out characters with a more formal way of speaking, like Huey or the Master or England or and ...idk?

[gallantgoggles]

Part of it, too, is that Will is very much in 'Old One on a mission' mode right now. He's doing the completely unreadable and irritatingly bland thing like he did in Greenwitch.. Even when he isn't actively showing it, his Old One side is very close to the surface. I think it might get better once he's been here for a few days and starts to relax a little. And he has made a few small jokes.

[rules_the_north]

*nod* well. I'd always love to have him and Sweden become friends or whatever. Talk more. I think Sweden would appreciate having someone like him to talk to.

[beyondimagining]

That sounds fun! Will is going to need some people he can talk to.

[beyondimagining]

Well, I just apped him a week ago. But its looking like he is going to be very fun to play in our little post apocalyptic city.

[beyondimagining]

Well, the little plot point of characters starting out with all non-human ability blocked confuses him terribly. No ones supposed to be able to do that to old Ones, you know. But the rest of it? There are already quite a few characters who are watching him because he didn't freak out at the situation. Or have any reaction beyond mild annoyance.

[beyondimagining]

He went straight from 'My goodness. I suppose I will be rather late getting home.' to asking around about the library and museum.