Concrit Post 14

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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being a pansy, sup

[anonymous]

I like your characters, but I do have some thoughts on Castiel. In my opinion and from what I've seen, you... I'm not sure if "emasculate" is the right word, but he seems less confident than he should be, if you know what I mean. He's an angel of the Lord, a being of might and fury designed to smite in God's name, and it would be nice to see his S5 vulnerability balanced with early S4 and S6 confident badassery in your characterization. He's such a nuanced character who goes through so many stages in canon that I think sometimes you get caught up in a certain aspect of who he is! It happens to a lot of people, of course, which is the tricky thing about the really wildly nuanced characters. I think if you keep this in mind more in the future, your Cas would really go above and beyond, since I know you're certainly capable of it with how much thought you put into your characters.

I'd also... hm, this isn't entirely concrit and more being curious. I've been essentially stalking a lot of Jimmy's threads, and I think it could be very interesting if you gave us a little more insight to what's going on inside his grapefruit. Not necessarily long essays about his thoughts on yaoi in every tag, but just the odd glimpse. He's a tough nut to crack, and I love watching you have fun with what an oddball he is. :)

[bellatrixkale23]

Thank you, anon. I've actually been trying to write more for Cas, but struggling. Finding a right blend of character for him has been tricky, seeing as how S6 has been going so far. I'm definitely gonna keep your words in mind. ^^

Can and will do on the Jimmy front~