Concrit Post 14

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

► Play nice! Flaming will not be tolerated, and threads with such will be deleted. Save the wank for anonmemearchive/roleplaysecrets► IP addresses are not

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[sauceytomato]

ACTIVE;
» Uchiha Sasuke [OU] | sauceytomato | adstringendum
» Uchiha Sasuke [OU] | theloneheir | niteo_nix
» Libitina [NPC] | myteriouswhite | niteo_nix

Everyone else here.

plzkthx

holycrap first

[sauceytomato]

I really like playing with you, but I do have a constructive crit. Take it as you will.

You use WAY too many tags.

An example of this: http://sauceytomato.livejournal.com/24337.html

You have more tags than actual words in your post. PLEASE consider using less?

[hoshi3]

About half of those in that particular post are contact tags, but yeah, I do know what you mean. I've been working on it, I'd like to think, and really create only 1-5 new tags, if at all.

But thanks for bringing it up regardless, anon! :)

[nendo_chan]

SAUUUUCE. Seriously, you and Hitsu both have made me love characters I disliked from pretty much their first appearances.

[hoshi3]

Keywords here, bb.

[nendo_chan]

Yep~

OK so I was a Sauce fangirl for a little bit when I first started reading, but everyone was.

[hoshi3]

He did have that cool guy thing going there in the beginning.