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Crit Post 28

May 13, 2011 23:02

Forgot to give a heads up about how late this would go up. :( Sorry! Thanks for being patient, guys. Remember, save the circle-jerking spam for love memes. If you want to tell someone "omg ilu bb," take a few seconds to think of a reason why. Also, if you comment, try critting/giving a constructive compliment to someone else. Pass it forward, and ( Read more... )

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lockandkeyblade May 14 2011, 03:59:23 UTC

S I R E N ' S P U L L

♥ Sora | lockandkeyblade | Kingdom Hearts

O N E P A S S I N G N I G H T

♥ AU Sora [V3] | lockandkeyblade | Kingdom Hearts

onceageneral May 14 2011, 04:08:45 UTC

I can't wait to be in a game with you again. You are awesome <3

Reasons: I hear his voice when I play against you. <3

lockandkeyblade May 14 2011, 05:09:31 UTC

MY GOD I MISS YOU LIKE BURNING.

onceageneral May 14 2011, 05:33:07 UTC

You better~ Mwah~ <3 other wise I'll have to keep bugging you more >D

I miss you like whoooooooa <3 I think if I don't get in to SP, I'll just follow you to OPN <3

lockandkeyblade May 14 2011, 20:59:11 UTC

Oh I really hope you get in too! I'll be crossing my fingers for you!

How long before they take a look at your app?

pullsheavendown May 14 2011, 04:21:02 UTC

My crit is that you need to finish yo education and become independently wealthy so you only have to work when you want to so you can tag me more.

I don't think we can be friends if you can't go along with these simple requests.

lockandkeyblade May 14 2011, 20:49:04 UTC

R-Roxas! o7

I will gladly fulfill this request! FOR OUR AWKWARD BRO TIEMS I WILL!

I WILL BE A TAG TSUNAMI FOR YOU.

pullsheavendown May 15 2011, 02:50:03 UTC

Excellent

THEN WE HAVE AN ACCORD.

lockandkeyblade May 16 2011, 03:29:10 UTC

We most certainly do, bb.

although IT MAY BE TOO SOON FOR THE TSUNAMI METAPHORS YET 8|a

pullsheavendown May 16 2011, 03:31:09 UTC

A TSUNAMI OF AWKWARD, PERHAPS?

lockandkeyblade May 16 2011, 03:33:20 UTC

IT WORKS.

it must be fate

pullsheavendown May 16 2011, 03:47:42 UTC

Destiny. Aw yeah.

headbumped May 14 2011, 04:27:54 UTC

I'm just so glad I was able to play with you during this whole time. Aaalmost a year, perhaps? And I can never say this enough, but sometimes I get that suspicious creepy feeling that you wrote the game script for Sora's parts, because his voice comes out so strong in every tag, and his essence is just there. And sometimes, that strong dialogue does get omitted out in favor of description in log types like THAT DREADED THIRD SAMPLE, but otherwise I really don't have much to crit on. Perhaps, give me a little more time on that.

It's also actually a good thing you don't bring out your other muses much considering it sways you to concentrate solely on him, which really seems to help a lot. I know you're worried about getting him out there so he can CR whore it up with everyone in the game ever, but don't worry about that til you're done with school stuff. OKAY? Okay.

As an off note, these two need a job. >:| Any suggestions?

lockandkeyblade May 14 2011, 21:09:46 UTC

Ahhh- I'm really glad I got to play with you too! It's been a lot longer than I thought @_@.

And ARGGHHH I HATE THOSE THIRD SAMPLES THEY MAKE ME JUST WANNA

/DESTROYs EVERYTHING

Hmmm... a job. Yeah, you know I really have no idea. Ideally, I'd like to place these guys where there's a lot of action and exposure to the cast, but Kahve is totally off limits to Sora and Merlotte's (sp?) seems like too much of an adult place for the goofster and this guy right here.

LMFAO could you see these two guys getting overrun by kids at some daycare 8B

headbumped May 14 2011, 21:19:57 UTC

It has. @_@ Time flies by so fast.

THOSE SAMPLES ARE BURNING AHHHHHH

At this rate there will be an arrest warrant, AND EVERYTHING WILL BE OFF LIMITS TO SORA. But yeah, I wonder... Maybe they'd be the type to try and put up their own business?

But THAT'D BE HORRIBLE. Considering the kids will mostly all have supernatural powers. 8B Or maybe they'd try to counteract the Org by offering up to protect people who need it, idk.

lockandkeyblade May 16 2011, 03:31:10 UTC

Lmfao I still remember when you were just that 'Roxas mun' who loved chasing after me and trolling me (in the best way of course)

Those samples are always my weakness. Always. Without fail, samples are my completely weakness. I can type up a post no problem when I'm already in game, but when it comes to applying for a new one, I'm terrible 8(

OR AT LEAST JUST KAHVE COFFEE SHOP OFF LIMITS ANYWAY orz

hahaha what are you talking about, that'd be glorious <3

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