Crit Post 27

[hmd_me]

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How's My Driving?∞ Comment with all the

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[umathematic]

polychromatic♝ Alan Ryves [ veritaphobia ] ↢ The Demon's Lexicon
☣ Hayato Gokudera [ umathematic ] ↢ Katekyo Hitman Reborn!

adstringendum♆ Nico Minoru [ deprecable ] ↢ Runaways
✄ Vincent Nightray [ haruspicate ] ↢ Pandora Hearts

Had an inactive month, tips welcomed anyway.

[dontdoovertime]

➤ Dirty Vegas

[bladekinds]

@ paradisa
endlessmagic - Beatrice - Umineko no Naku Koro ni

@ the_devils_see
endlessmagic - Beatrice - Umineko no Naku Koro ni

@ planeocracy
lunchmuffs - Jade Harley - MSPA: Homestuck

@ microcosm_rp
spidersona - Vriska Serket - MSPA: Homestuck

@ demeleier
goldlace - Beatrice - Umineko no Naku Koro ni

@ discedo
antimystery - Beatrice - Umineko no Naku Koro ni

Other:
miraclekakera - Lion Ushiromiya - Umineko no Naku Koro ni
heartserved - Shannon - Umineko no Naku Koro ni
ephemeralcrab - Hitagi Senjougahara - Bakemonogatari
whatsoverthere - Yuyuko - Touhou Project
fatedmagia - Madoka Kaname - Puella Magi Madoka Magica (apping @ the-devils-see)
dancenotquack - Ahiru - Princess Tutu

I'd especially love feedback on Jade and Madoka mO_Om

[paako]

aaah Beato. I've yet to tag her but I've seen her around TDS and I do like how you've been able to keep making game analogies without it going overboard :D my phrasing is so shot but I hope you get what I mean?? ;;

ALSO I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING MADOKA OH MAN

[endlessmagic]

no i know what you mean! one of my bigger worries is always balancing the many... sides she has to her--and part of that is the chess geek she tends to be hahahah. hope we can play together soon and thank you for the feedback!!

[sunsingergirl]

THE BEST LIGHT EVER <333

[perfectrecord]

Homeless/fountainofcod/dear_mun/acedressing (for Ace Attorney characters only)/IC memes/etc.:

Manfred von Karma (Ace Attorney): perfectrecord (formerly at damned; has a screened/anon-enabled/IP-logging-disabled HMD post)
Manfred von Karma (Ace Attorney): lawful_perfect (formerly at stedelweiss)
Mike Meekins (Ace Attorney): dork_at_duty (apping to damned)
The Judge (Ace Attorney): judgey_udgey
Link (The Legend of Zelda Philips CD-i series): dotheduckwalk
Nabooru (The Legend of Zelda, Ocarina of Time): sage_of_spirit
Tasslehoff Burrfoot (Dragonlance): not_a_cutpurse
Lucca (Chrono Trigger): guns_n_glasses
Bastian Balthazar Bux (The Neverending Story): itsonlyastory

And any others not listed are fair game. I also have an all-purpose feedback post here; anon is enabled, IP logging is disabled, and all comments are screened by default.

I welcome crit on anything, and I'm especially interested in writing and characterization. Although I'm not currently in any formal games, I am aware that my biggest issue right now is that of activity and thread follow-through. Any advice on how to improve that, even given my RL schedule, would be greatly appreciated, since I hate dropping threads too soon, even if I'm not

[sunsingergirl]

I hope you make it back into Damned! We miss you, and Mike seems like he'll be a fun character!