Concrit Post 19

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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Kinda pointless by now, since scarcely anyone ever replies to mine, but whatever

[perfectrecord]

At damned:

Manfred von Karma (Ace Attorney): perfectrecord
He also has an anon-enabled, IP-logging-disabled HMD entry at the top of his journal, his tracking post (updated today) is here should you need it, and here's some head canon stuff I recently posted, that you're welcome to nitpick away at.

Homeless/fountainofcod/dear_mun/etc.:

Mike Meekins (Ace Attorney): dork_at_duty
The Judge (Ace Attorney): judgey_udgey
Lucca (Chrono Trigger); guns_n_glasses
Nabooru (The Legend of Zelda); sage_of_spirit
Tasslehoff Burrfoot (Dragonlance): not_a_cutpurse

And anyone else not mentioned that you know of is fair game. You can also leave crit for them here at my all-purpose concrit post, also anon-enabled and IP-logging-disabled.

As always, I welcome crit on anything, both anon and logged-in. I'm especially interested in ICness and writing, and especially whether I've improved on the tl;dr issue that was pointed out in some of von Karma's prose tags. (I've been working on cutting that down; how's that been working out so far?) I know my biggest issue is that of activity, so any tips on how to improve that in the face of lack of motivation and brain fail would be greatly appreciated.

As always, thanks in advance! <3

not pointless. B|

[oftemptation]

I think you're as IC as ever -- which is to say excellently so. And I've noticed the paring down on the tl;dr, and that's a really good improvement.

As for activity - I do have a suggestion, but I'll grab you privately about it. Nothing bad, I promise, just something that doesn't need to be splashed out here. <333

Pffffff <3

[perfectrecord]

Thanks, bb. <3 I'm very glad to hear that because believe me, he's one tough bastard to play and difficult to keep IC at times. XD;;; And I'm especially glad to hear that the needless tl;dr has indeed been cut down, because that's not an easy thing for me to do when I'm just pounding out tags and getting them written up.

We've already discussed the activity issue offline, but thanks so much for the suggestion on that, too. <33333 I appreciate it.