Concrit Post 16

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[srsbusinessk]

omai, I hadn't seen that you had your own thread. /fails

Crowley, Crowley, Crowley. What to say? I really really like the way you play him. He's very sarcastic and sneaky, the way he is in the show perfectly. He's also kind of creepy, which works really well. Lol. I think the only criticism I can really give is that he's a bit too..what's the word?...maybe cozy? I don't know how to explain it. Lol.

Pretty much, I think he warms up to people a little too easily. In canon, it takes him awhile to even partially treat Sam and Dean like allies, and even then, he keeps them at a distance. I'm not saying Crowley can't be friendly, I'm just saying it should be a suspicious kind of friendly, like he's trying to get something out of being someone's friend. He's a jerk like that.

Other than that, there's really nothing I can see wrong with him. I mean, even that isn't really a big deal cuz you don't do it too often. The interactions I've seen of him with other people are generally very very well done. Just try not to let him turn into a teddy bear, it'd ruin his reputation. ;]

You're doing a great job, bb, and I love interacting with our resident Lover in League against Satan. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to playing with him more. ♥

[seal_the_deal]

Heh, I know what you mean. I think the problem is that I'm trying to bring in elements from Good Omens which I should probably stop because it's clearly confusing me and everyone else. Ah well. New muses are always a bugger to break in. I'll work on it.

[srsbusinessk]

Well, that could definitely explain it. I've only ever heard of Good Omens in passing, so if that's the case, you might be doing perfectly and I wouldn't even know. XD;;

Either way, don't worry too much. It doesn't affect his characterization too much, just makes him a wee bit more huggable than he should be. lol.

[seal_the_deal]

My muse is deeply offended by the implication that he could be considered huggable XD

[srsbusinessk]

Pssshh, as soon as he made the Lovers in League joke, I totally wanted to squish him. Possibly one of my favorite jokes from the whole series. He's huggable. XD