Happy Holidays, Vari!

[amand_r]

Title: Rejoice
Author: Unovis/ unovis_lj aka Robbie the Reindeer
Written for: Vari/agardenafter
Characters/Pairings: Duncan/someone
Rating: PG *WBR*
Warnings: BEWARE OF LITERATURE!
Author's Notes: At least it's not runes in a bag. Many feather-headed but still sincere thanks to the readers who saw this in various stages of completion while I was dithering away (carenejeans, I'm

Comments

[juniperphoenix]

Oh, yes. :) This is fantastic. I love the cadence of the words; it works so perfectly with the ups and downs of anticipation and disappointment. Wonderful sense of place, too. I could feel myself back in the overcrowded bookshop. Really a great story.

[unovis]

Thank you. I'm happy it works as a bit of a mystery.

[amand_r]

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I used to be able to write like this, but now it's all "I like gum" and Joss Whedon jokes.

And the men...he closed his eyes. Pomaded hair. Elastic, braided, starched, textures in combinations unlike anything today; bands and closures to press past and beneath, to reach satin, yielding skin. Oh, gone, gone.

Yes. Oh yes.

Odds that every piece of feedback for this fic contain the words "Yes, Oh Yes": 100%

[unovis]

Trade you.
Thanks for your patience and for listening to my gabble, trying to get this out.

[adabsolutely]

Yes! Oh yes! Tension and lovely writing at the same time, wonderful. The literati are fine by me.

[unovis]

Thanks *g* I'm late answering, but I'm happy you liked this.

[lferion]

Oh, this is so, so *right*. So rich and tactile and with all the sense of continuity with the past, braided in with awareness of the present/future.

Yes, Oh, yes.

[unovis]

Braid *coff*
Happy you liked it!

[reshcat]

“...yes I will Yes.”

“Oh, yes,” answered the voice, the deep voice in his ear, and Duncan laughed.

Exquisite! Thank you so much, this is really !yes! wonderful.

[unovis]

Thanks! I'm late answering, but I'm happy you liked this.