Book Sections - Chapter One

[hlgem]

What I will be doing is posting book sections. I'll try to keep the links up to all the current versions, so you can read what I've written so far. BTW way not working title for the book as yet. Any good suggestions would be helpful

Comments

[inaraserra]

Wow, Gem that is really good. I like the new version. Adding the bit about why she was a life-long slave and how he "sets her free" - really cool. Can't wait to read more. Going to have to wait though, I need some sleep. See you later tonight!!!!

Karen

[anonymous]

SteveP here :)

It looks mighty shiny to me so far Gem ,im really interested and future installments :)