Comments | hjpatience: Fic: Freefalling [Star Trek XI]

hjpatience

Fic: Freefalling [Star Trek XI]

May 20, 2009 20:30

My contribution to DRABBLE ON THE EDGE OF FOREVER over at ( Read more... )

star trek, fanfic

Comments 43

yahtzee63 May 20 2009, 20:11:02 UTC

VERY excellent. I love where you went with this. :)

hjpatience May 20 2009, 20:41:47 UTC

Thanks! I couldn't resist when I saw your drabble challenge.

schweinsty May 20 2009, 23:38:03 UTC

Oh, I really loved this :D. Your Sulu is really neat, and I really liked the dialogue between him and Kirk. I hope to see more from you :D.

hjpatience May 21 2009, 11:35:40 UTC

Thanks for the feedback - I want to do more in this fandom too but I'll admit my understanding on TOS canon is sketchy. Baby steps to start with I think...

thoran_ziyal May 21 2009, 11:29:31 UTC

Nicely done! I liked Sulu a lot and I'm glad you made Kirk be 'less colourful' in an area where no one knows him.

hjpatience May 21 2009, 11:36:49 UTC

Thanks! I love your icon.

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hjpatience May 21 2009, 16:35:58 UTC

Thanks - I loved in the movie how Sulu rescued Kirk and Kirk rescued Sulu right back (except not in a pretty women way).

saavikam77 May 21 2009, 14:39:28 UTC

So perfect! I love that they decided to look forward, rather than back on what all happened. And Kirk's confidence about them all getting back on the Enterprise was just spot on! ^_~

hjpatience May 21 2009, 16:36:23 UTC

Thanks. As for Kirk's confidence, well he is a cocky bastard isn't he? Good thing it's justified.