Bruises - NewS - PG-13

[hizashikage]

Title: Bruises
Author: anamuan
Pairing/Group: RyoPi
Rating:PG-13
Word Count: 1,545
Warnings: Remember, smoking kills.
Notes: Originally for procreational for the je_holiday gift exchange. I'm glad you liked it dear. You comment made me insanely happy. Also thanks to anyone else who commented. ♥♥♥ to you all :DDDD
Thanks to sillyandmorbid and nihongofrancais for reading it over for me and giving me 'second

Comments

[rolling_scone]

I love the tone of this piece.

Both doors closed and there was a moment where they could listen to the non-silence, hear the steady rattling drum of rain hitting the windshield.
that just... it sounds so blue. (as in the colour)

When Yamapi put down his fork, Ryo slid back into Yamapi's lap. Ryo moved in for another kiss--hard, like the first--cigarette dangling loosely from his fingers. It tasted like humidity and smoke.
beautiful. it's so jaded somehow, but mostly longing, and a sporadic happiness. (if that makes sense.)

*_*

awesome.

[anamuan]

i read things as colors sometimes too. I was afraid i was the only one ♥

thank you so much for picking out quotes and telling me what you thought. i love that kind of thing, so i'm ecstatic ^_^ I'm glad you liked it.

[mycroftnext]

I'll do this here because I'm lazy and I remembered when I saw your screenname even though it would probably be more apropos elsewhere.

anamuan sent me your fic in an edited version (I don't read smut), because she told me that I absolutely had to read it. It was very very impressive. The parallel timelines and how you characterized everyone was really amazing. You are much better than you give yourself credit for. You were able to create a really interesting ambiance of longing that I really liked, even though it squished my heart into a little pancake

[rolling_scone]

nawww, that's so cute X3 a couple years back I made a proper post where I recorded songs and explained everything, but I couldn't this year :P it's probably my favourite Swedish tradition, and the only thing I miss from grade school. it's quite scary to walk around with a candle in your hand around so much hair, but I've never been Lucia, and I'm glad for it, because it gets really really warm after a while, and if you move your head too much you get candle wax in your hair. I like the electrical lusse-crowns kids wear. safe and easy

Wow, my turnaround time is epic...sorry about that

[mycroftnext]

My sister and I used to wear an electronic crown, but the batteries in it were soooo heavy, they would really hurt our heads, so one year Mom suggested, "Why not try real candles?" So we took out the batteries and put in clay in which we stuck the candles, and away we went. I was the first to wear the real-candle crown, and Dad said that the whole time he had visions of my (rather long) hair going up in flames. In later years we got smart and put some clear plastic wrap on the top of my head so that the wax at least didn't get stuck at the root of my hair. That definitely hurts to try and brush out