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Well, fuck.
I checked Mayfield's apps page to be sure there wasn't anything I missed and according to what they have in the boxes, I need to basically describe Brooke's entire world, add at least two more paragraphs on personality, including details on her relationships with other characters from her world (like her brother Jason, and her friends Bronera, Sara, and Zain), and an introspective sample as well.
I don't remember seeing that all there when I first copied the HTML into Semagic to start on my draft...
I don't want to write Brooke's entire fucking life story and then some, I JUST WANT TO PLAY.
I checked Mayfield's apps page to be sure there wasn't anything I missed and according to what they have in the boxes, I need to basically describe Brooke's entire world, add at least two more paragraphs on personality, including details on her relationships with other characters from her world (like her brother Jason, and her friends Bronera, Sara, and Zain), and an introspective sample as well.
I don't remember seeing that all there when I first copied the HTML into Semagic to start on my draft...
I don't want to write Brooke's entire fucking life story and then some, I JUST WANT TO PLAY.