Fic: Foregone Conclusion (1/1)

Jan 21, 2010 16:08

Title: Foregone Conclusion
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Word Count: 997
Summary: If plans counted for anything, Leonard McCoy would certainly not be where he is right now. For team_jones at st_respect’s Ship Wars, for Challenge Prompt #1: “First Date.” Spoilers for Star Trek XI (2009).
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
Author’s Notes: Banter-y. Just banter ( Read more... )

fanfic:challenge, pairing:star trek:kirk/mccoy, character:star trek:leonard h. mccoy, fanfic, fanfic:pg-13, fanfic:oneshot, challenge:st_respectshipwars, fanfic:star trek, character:star trek:james t. kirk

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siluria January 21 2010, 22:46:58 UTC
I just love the way you write these two, and the banter that goes back and forth. This is just perfect for them xx

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hitlikehammers January 22 2010, 17:41:34 UTC
Thank you so much, doll; I'm so glad you thought the banter fit them well :)

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skyblue_reverie January 21 2010, 22:52:22 UTC
Gorgeous, just gorgeous. I love the banter, and the imagery, and Bones' internal voice. ♥

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hitlikehammers January 22 2010, 17:42:34 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you thought Bones' internal monologue was fitting :)

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mijan January 21 2010, 22:57:28 UTC
*grins* Leave it to Jim to suggest a hand job in a situation like that... and then to follow that up with the suggestion of a blow job. *snicker*

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hitlikehammers January 22 2010, 17:44:08 UTC
But of course! Our Jim has no reservations ;)

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rubynye January 21 2010, 22:58:28 UTC
“So you’d suck me off in a hospital by which you weren’t employed?”

I think that's where I went from giggling to outright whooping. :D

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hitlikehammers January 22 2010, 17:43:35 UTC
Hehehe, thank you, doll - I'm thrilled you found it amusing :D

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the_dala January 21 2010, 23:25:44 UTC
Yay, this one! I love the banter. The banter is key.

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hitlikehammers January 22 2010, 17:45:31 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the banter worked for you :)

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