Fic: A Night With Mr. Walker (1/1)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: A Night With Mr. Walker
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Tony/Pepper
Word Count: 1,357
Summary: The most important discussion of his life is one he won’t remember in the morning. Movieverse. For the pepperony100 Prompt #30 - Drink.
Prompt Table: Here
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
Author’s Notes: The result of one of my jobs, and reading about potential

Comments

[firthgal]

Oh, this was so beautifully angsty, I loved it! I could feel his torment through the whole thing, and I loved that very last paragraph, because it sums up the Tony/Pepper relationship so well. Awesome fic!

[hitlikehammers]

Aww, thank you! I was hoping the last paragraph would sum it up nicely :)

[ancarett]

Oh, what a tough time for Tony. I loved how he compared himself, a bit wistfully!, to Peter Parker. But the conclusion was a wonderful way to finish this up with Pepper showing that, once again, she knows how to keep things running smoothly.

[hitlikehammers]

Oh, Peter Parker. Who doesn't love a little Spidey? Thank you for the review, I am glad you enjoyed this.

[backporchpoet]

I have had Tony/Peter parallels in my head for days. They both are smitten with the fiery red-heads but are also flabbergasted by them. This was so angsty but in a really great way. Some of the dialog is top-notch. Fantastic stuff.

[hitlikehammers]

Me too on the Tony/Peter parallels; they're harassing me. And thank you; I am always hesitant on my dialogue in particular, and I'm very, very glad that it worked for you :D

[abelard369]

This was heartbreakingly beautiful and I love it. Phenomenal.

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you, very much.

[anonymiss731]

It's horrifying how long it took me to figure out the title. It's Johnny Walker...duh. OMFG, I'm slow...I need to drink more to remedy this error.

Anyway, lovely fic. I like the balance of Tony's self loathing and narcissism. And Pepper doing things without him ever knowing. I especially liked the Spider-man reference. ^__^ Great work.

[hitlikehammers]

You aren't slow; I was afraid it wouldn't pop out at people, because not everyone has spent time working for an establishment which sells hard liquor (like I have, and I know it's done things to the way I think). But I am glad you enjoyed it; thanks for reading!