Fic: This Is How It Works (1/1)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: This Is How It Works
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Tony/Pepper
Word Count: 2,095
Summary: He finds her doubled over, sobbing into her newly manicured hands, and it hurts, because she really is all he has, and the only thing he truly knows is that this doesn’t work. Movieverse. For the pepperony100 Prompt #82 - Work.
Prompt Table: Here
Disclaimer: I own nothing

Comments

[obliviousally]

Oh god, this made my misty-eyed. D: D:

[hitlikehammers]

I hope it was a good misty eyed.

[obliviousally]

Of course! :D

[hitlikehammers]

Then I am very pleased :)

[takumachi]

I'm with you on this. It's just so beautiful. I do hope you keep writing.

I don't know what else to say, it's that good. ^.^

[hitlikehammers]

Not unconstructive at all; you’ve made me grin like an idiot. Thank you, so much.

[captain_elessar]

I really liked this. The run-ons didn't bother me :D it was well done with the stream of consciousness. I also like the logical formating, that was fun and unusual. Also, accounting and accountibility kinda made me crack up.

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you for finding that funny! I, personally, giggled at it and therefore decided to include it once it popped into my head. And I am glad you liked the rest of it, of course…;)

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you; I am glad you thought so :)

[antiquitea]

I will admit, at the beginning there the run-on sentences had me cringing a little bit ... but you made it work. It was absolutely beautiful, and the words rolled off my tongue (so to speak) as I read them. It was perfection, and everything I believe their relationship would be. :)

[hitlikehammers]

I am very glad that you could get past the cringe-worthy run-ons and work through to the end; I appreciate your perseverance, in the first place. Secondly, thank you so much for your kind words. I am entirely pleased that you enjoyed this piece, and that it all tied together for you and flowed well.