Fic: Eclipse (14/?)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: Eclipse
Rating: R
Pairing: Ten/Donna (Friendship, UST)
Word Count: 1,626
Summary: If it hadn’t been so exhilarating, it may well have been absolutely humiliating. Spoilers for Doctor Who 4.13 - Journey’s End.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot. Story title inspired by The Frames.
Author’s Notes: Just a tiny little interlude, because

Comments

[shining_moment]

I just got home and said a big "yay!" when I saw you'd posted this. I love it, I love the thought of Donna knowing exactly what's happening but still needing to build herself up to telling him.

Oh, I just love it all!

[hitlikehammers]

Awww, posting was enough to make you "yay"? *grins* Thank you ever so much; I am so thrilled that you're still enjoying this, and that you don't think that the build up is too excessive... I've been wondering if it's taking too long (just a few more chapters to endure, I promise!)

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you! I was trying to run the line between their natural banter, and something a little deeper, a little more romantic; I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

[kwiknkleen]

I so love this story. It's so sweet reading about him teaching Donna how to be a Time Lady. I also like how you are developing their relationship, not hurrying things along. Great job.

[hitlikehammers]

Goodness; thank you! And I'm so glad that you like the slow sort of pacing; it's coming to a head pretty soon, now, but I didn't want to rush it - I'm so pleased that it's working for you.

!

[welshred]

This part was so not shit! Ingenious! Without snuggling the Dr, Donna gets sick!

It was so sweet and sexy, can't wait for more!

Re: !

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you! I'm glad that little plot-hitch didn't seem too cliched - it sounded to me like a playfully appropriate sort of buildup while I was working on it, so I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!

[time_converges]

Brilliant - the UST is killing me! :)

I love the gradual building of the relationship, and how patient he's being with helping her adapt to being a Timelady.

I'm always so happy when a new chapter of this pops up. :)

[hitlikehammers]

Guh - thank you! I am inexplicably pleased that the UST isn't too much; it won't last much longer (I hope that's not a turnoff) but I was afraid it was too drawn out to begin with. Next chapter (if my current progress continues) should be up soon!

[time_converges]

No, that's not a turnoff. :D