Fic: Shouldn’t Have (1/1)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: Shouldn’t Have
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Richard/Juliet
Word Count: 100
Summary:. She does things she shouldn’t. For bold_seer and angeldylan628, who requested “Be Brief” at The lostsquee 2010 Lost Summer Luau. Spoilers Through 3.16 - One Of Us.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
Author’s Notes: For bold_seer and angeldylan628: because your pairing is made of win :)

Comments

[greedyslayer]

Beatiful in its brevity.

I'm guessing this is on the way to the Island and she's drugged by Richard? Or on the way to the sub that'll take her to the Island?

I just love Juliet/Richard so much, and you did a wonderful drabble with them here.

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so much! And yes, that's the setting I had in mind, on the sub :)

[bold_seer]

I'm sorry I'm so late to this! :/

your pairing is made of win :)

Awesome person #1 + awesome person #2 = pretty good ship, y/y? ;)

She leans into him; he gives, as if he expected to all along. He’s not warm enough; she doesn’t mind.

This is wonderfully evocative! I love that image of them. And this - shouldn’t have, but then again, Juliet ends up doing a lot of things she shouldn’t - gets a heart for describing who Juliet is so well in so few words. <3

Thank you so much! :D

[hitlikehammers]

That is definitely a fool-proof formula for a good ship ;)

More importantly, though: thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed this little snippet :D