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Fic: Come Down Now (The World Will Fall From Above) (1/1)

Sep 10, 2010 08:27

Title: Come Down Now (The World Will Fall From Above)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Charlotte/Daniel
Word Count: 1,014
Summary: Daniel lives in the jungle; doesn’t have a surname. For valhalla37, who requested “Tropes” at The lostsquee 2010 Lost Summer Luau. General Spoilers Through Season Five.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
Author’s Notes: For valhalla37: I don’t know if ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

greedyslayer September 12 2010, 09:16:52 UTC

YES, I've wanted this AU for so long. And I love the flashes of timetravelling Hurley and Kate.~

hitlikehammers September 15 2010, 12:50:19 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

valhalla37 September 20 2010, 02:19:26 UTC

SO GOOD.

SO, SO, SO GOOD.

I have to apologize because it seems like any time I leave feedback it ends up being capslock-y, fangirling flailing, but that's pretty much what your fic does to me, haha. ;P

This concept alone -- I'm completely, absolutely in love with the idea of some AU where Daniel and Charlotte both grow up on the island together and have some kind of Romeo-and-Juliet-esque, Dharma-vs.-Others romance. So to see this totally had me squeeing, and you do it so well. And the way they grow together -- from wandering off and playing in the jungle to Daniel helping Charlotte with her homework to the birthday cake to drinking wine in the van ... there's something so sweetly nostalgic about all of it, and I love how their relationship sort of unfolds and it so adorable.

And the last scene! :D :D :D And the ending! :D :D :D This especially -- hen she gasps and breathes, its him that fills her lungs ( ... )

hitlikehammers September 25 2010, 02:21:18 UTC

Doll, I cannot tell you how happy I am that this worked for you, and that you liked it -- really and truly, thank you so, so much. That the concept was to your liking, and that the execution was enjoyable for you, and just... yes. THANK YOU!

And you have no idea how giddy it makes me every single time to see your "flailing," as you termed it -- which is amazing and wonderful and flattering and makes me blush and grin and everything -- in response to something I did. So yes, never apologize for something so awesome.