oh, god. this was, i'm lying for dead here, with all of this mush just spilling out.
this was beautiful, a beautiful wreck. and you beat me to it, the blind concept that is, though mine seems to be exploding into some monster of a story that i can't control. this was so timed, so sweet. i picked up on brendon's strange proclivities early on, but the magnitude of the situation didn't truly hit until he told ryan that he wished that he could see him.
i was just, i felt like i was being torn in half so slowly. though i feel so good
i kind of love you a lot right now. i was so worried that no one would get it, but after all the subtlety, I didn't want to just outright state that he was blind. your comment is making me so very happy.
also, i really really want to read yours, too. really bad.
Thoroughly enjoyed this. Absolutely beautiful. I loved how you made it flow gorgeously, and yet kept it disjointed, like snapshots. Wonderful, wonderful story.
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jesusfuckdamn.
you, your words, your mind. so beautiful. so eloquent.
so heart shattering.
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thank you
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i'm lying for dead here, with all of this mush just spilling out.
this was beautiful, a beautiful wreck. and you beat me to it, the blind concept that is, though mine seems to be exploding into some monster of a story that i can't control.
this was so timed, so sweet.
i picked up on brendon's strange proclivities early on, but the magnitude of the situation didn't truly hit until he told ryan that he wished that he could see him.
i was just, i felt like i was being torn in half so slowly.
though i feel so good
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also, i really really want to read yours, too. really bad.
thank you <3
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Absolutely beautiful.
I loved how you made it flow gorgeously, and yet kept it disjointed, like snapshots.
Wonderful, wonderful story.
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thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.
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