fic: have found out what you are like

Jan 18, 2008 09:46


have found out what you are like.
nc-17. 2400 words.
ryan/brendon, au

and there you were )

ryan/brendon, fic, nc-17, 2000+ words

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different_shade January 18 2008, 20:51:00 UTC
That was so very sweet but also a little heartbreaking.

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hitchedtoastar January 19 2008, 15:56:42 UTC
i'm glad you enjoyed it. thank you, <3.

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melish January 18 2008, 21:06:06 UTC
'i wish i could see you.'

jesusfuckdamn.
you, your words, your mind. so beautiful. so eloquent.
so heart shattering.

<3

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hitchedtoastar January 19 2008, 15:56:59 UTC
ily

thank you

<3

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hitchedtoastar January 19 2008, 15:58:06 UTC
but i'm the luckier one, to have an angel like you to save me.

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gingerrstar January 19 2008, 03:17:16 UTC
oh, god. this was,
i'm lying for dead here, with all of this mush just spilling out.

this was beautiful, a beautiful wreck. and you beat me to it, the blind concept that is, though mine seems to be exploding into some monster of a story that i can't control.
this was so timed, so sweet.
i picked up on brendon's strange proclivities early on, but the magnitude of the situation didn't truly hit until he told ryan that he wished that he could see him.

i was just, i felt like i was being torn in half so slowly.
though i feel so good

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hitchedtoastar January 19 2008, 15:49:05 UTC
i kind of love you a lot right now. i was so worried that no one would get it, but after all the subtlety, I didn't want to just outright state that he was blind. your comment is making me so very happy.

also, i really really want to read yours, too. really bad.

thank you <3

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fictionalfaerie January 19 2008, 03:46:58 UTC
Thoroughly enjoyed this.
Absolutely beautiful.
I loved how you made it flow gorgeously, and yet kept it disjointed, like snapshots.
Wonderful, wonderful story.

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hitchedtoastar January 19 2008, 15:59:22 UTC
i'm glad the pace worked for you. it came out differently than i had intended, but i'm satisfied with the end result.

thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

<3

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