Unrequited Love

Jun 07, 2010 17:22

 Unrequited Love
I’m falling deeper into this feeling,
While I struggle to break free.
This isn’t supposed to happen,
He doesn’t even look at me.
His heart is not mine to hold,
But this feeling won’t leave.
I can’t seem to fool myself,
No matter how hard I believe.
The very thought of him not there,
Makes these tears threaten to fall.
Living with this ( Read more... )

#personal, #poetry

Leave a comment

Comments 4

animefan961 June 7 2010, 21:59:59 UTC
You inspire me to write more poetry because you're so awesome~

Reply

his_angel16 June 7 2010, 22:13:03 UTC
XD awww thanks! i'm glad i can be of some sort of help!! lol hahaha

Reply


dbsk_2pm February 13 2011, 23:28:28 UTC
this made me cry :(
haha...it's kind of weird how your poetry fits perfectly with my life :))
I like the way you write, more than those autors they force me to study at highschool...

Reply

his_angel16 February 14 2011, 00:19:29 UTC
Awww. No. Don't cry. Haha.
I usually write from my own life experiences and sometimes what I see others going through. :)
Your comments have put me in a really good mood...and I needed to be in a good mood today. ^_______^ I don't usually like hardly anything that I write, but seeing comments like your makes me realize that I probably don't write as badly as I think. Hahaha.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up