it's been a while again.

[his_alter_ego]

a cliffhanger. This is a teaser. I got this far and had to stop and "take care of myself". unfortunately, I don't have time to finish right now and I'll finish with a post later that should contain the ending

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wow

[mrshannibal]

wow, again...really good...the visual is wonderful...have been there and like it...thank you...gives me something to do tonite...thank you again...

Re: wow

[his_alter_ego]

thank you. though I havent had time to compete this and I dont know if you've read my earlier stories (with the "killer endings"--har har-- but I want to write more of those again)
do you have any suggestion for a scene you'd like me to write about?

Re: wow

[mrshannibal]

i liked the killer end one just before this post - being a woman myself, it REALLY got me off and i don't know why...still...wow...
as for suggestions - well, my bf and i are into b&d (i.e., spankings, tying me up, nipple clamps, clothes pins, cat'o'nine tails, leather riding crop, handcuffs, anal sex,etc...) - so, take from that what you will...
i really like your writing style...it makes me feel like either i'm the female or i'm right there in the room...
great! keep up the excellent work...

Re: wow

[his_alter_ego]

thank you and I'll try toincorperate some of that in. I've never written with B&D before other than the small stuff you've already read. (rope, tape, handcuffs, etc.) but no leather or clamps. I'll see what I can do and how to include a "killer ending" for you too. heh

Re: wow

[mrshannibal]

oh, wow... aren't you the thoughtful one?!
;)

Re: wow

[his_alter_ego]

would you liek to be there? in the room? if you have a picture of yourself I could look at or a description of your self (detailed if possible) I'll use your description as the woman in the story.

Re: wow

[mrshannibal]

oh, no - what you do is just fine with me...i kind have a thing about reading what happens to other women - real or imagined...if you don't mind...you have a great imagination...thanks, tho', for the thought...
:)

Re: wow

[his_alter_ego]

understood. I have started the story some but will finish it in the next few days. hopefully tomorrow if not later tonight.

I'll try to think of something...

Re: wow

[mrshannibal]

well aren't you the one? how cool...