3 Little Drabbles for footie100 :)
Hi Ho! Only 3 drabbles for now but hey, better than nothing, yea :D:D??
Author : hiro_chan
Rating : G - R
Prompt : Frustration
Disclaimer : Liieeessss, all are liieeesss ;)
( Drabble 1. Paul Scholes )
Author : hiro_chan
Rating : G - R
Prompt : Frustration
Disclaimer : Liieeessss, all are liieeesss ;)
( Drabble 1. Paul Scholes )
SO SO CUTE. i can just picture it all. and the frustration and the helplessness. this has to be my favourite. ♥ it was just so real and it is really easy to associate with paul because we've all been there - felt helpless and there wasn't anything we could do. sdlgkndskgn. i really love it a lot! :D
SDKLGNSKLGDN WAYNE AND CRIS! awwww!
because the warm water pelting on his skin wasn't as warm as Wayne's body
i pretty much melted in my seat at this part. and just. sigh. i really like your style of comparing one thing to another, it's really lovely. it has to be one of my favourite points of your writing, but then again, i love everything about it.
and the last one, i enjoyed! i thought it was perfect the way it is. of course, you could've went on more, but i like it the way it is. and i love that last line. awww! wayne! :(
as always, lovely writing, my love! i really... need to make my #1 hiro_chan icon soon. LOL. ;)
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Thank you thank you thank you :). I'm so glad #1 came out really nicely, it's my personal favourite, and you're right, it's easy to relate with Paul's feeling that night.
Then again you can also easily relate to Ronaldo in #2 and Wayne in #3 because I think everyone has gone through similar situation too (not necessarily jerking off like Cris did, but you know what I mean *g*)
You made me feel better about #3. I keep feeling there should be more to it, but the replies here made me feel better :).
Now. I shall wait patiently (or not :p) for the Ole/Paul fic :):):).
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