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fic: la la love you

Jul 01, 2009 22:28

Title: La La Love You
Characters/Pairing: Rupert/Penny, Penelope, Aurelie, Henry,
Rating: PG-13-ish, I guess.
Summary: "I wish we could go back."
"I don't know how to rewind."
"The rewind button."
Notes: This is for vhari, mostly because I la la love you.
This is a bit disjointed, but it's all I've got. More fragments than anything else.

( la la love you )

pairing: rupert/penelope, character: henry timmonds, character: penelope harper, character: aurelie durand, character: rupert ash

Comments 28

corleones July 1 2009, 12:52:44 UTC

This ached in a really lovely way. I adore the way you write.

andsheloves July 2 2009, 05:35:02 UTC

Thanks so much. ♥

salianka July 1 2009, 13:47:12 UTC

If I had to express my feelings after reading this text, I would have to quote Cassie from Skins: 'oh wow lovely' :) I adore that these are, in fact, only short fragments. Your style is really good and that's why these little pieces of actual story fit Rupert and Penelope so perfectly.

(IDK if my comment makes sense, but- it's just well written & you know that I love those two.)

♥

andsheloves July 2 2009, 05:35:53 UTC

Aw, thank you sweetie. ♥

flatlined July 1 2009, 13:58:12 UTC

(!!!)

I love that you write in fragments.

Oh, wow.

How are you this good?

My bus icon has a story.

Oh-

My heart. You make my heart ache. Deliciously.

Lovely.

♥

andsheloves July 2 2009, 05:37:25 UTC

♥ ♥ ♥

salianka July 1 2009, 14:08:48 UTC

Oh, stupid me, I don't want to delete my comment again. *faceplam*

I just wanted to add the line I liked the most: Rupert doesn't need to ask, although, out of politeness, he probably would, because it's, well, too cute for not posting it.

andsheloves July 2 2009, 05:38:31 UTC

♥ Thank you!!!

backtograce July 1 2009, 14:28:43 UTC

HOLY FREAKING CRAP. I SAW THIS AND INSTANTLY MY DAY WAS BRIGHTER. /fangirling-before-reading

Small typos? She draws on his skin with the tips of his fingers.

The loose curls rise with a small rush of hair

She delicately swipes the colour over her nails, careful not to mess up teh edges.

She leans up, places her hand lightly on his hceek,

doesn't mention anything to Henry or Rupert or any other other.

takes her hand seconds before she strips over a rock.

She pulls him toward her, fingers lingering ont he soft skin of his neck.

She finds it on her dorrstep the next day

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OKAY, NOW THAT I'M DONE CORRECTING EVERYTHING. I la la love this. (That's so adorable, fyi.) I love the pieces -- it's like Penny and Rupert don't want us to see everything, they just give us little fragments of their lives. It's a unique way to tell a tale and, though I'd like for some of them to be longer, it fits these two so perfectly.

That said, I think my favourite line of the entire piece was You break me in two.Lovely job, bb, and it's nice to see ( ... )

andsheloves July 2 2009, 05:32:53 UTC

Thank you! I don't know how I missed those (I always manage to miss something.)

Haha, THANK YOU. ♥

backtograce July 2 2009, 14:07:06 UTC

No problem, honey. It's what I'm here for. :]

You're welcome! &hearts