Middlemen | #8.1

Apr 18, 2011 05:33

Eight: From past to present

Jinki remembers simple mornings in the orphanage; a memory burning bright similar to the yellow of the sun streaming through the windows. When he was fourteen Yunho would gather every orphan in the dining room. The ceilings were high, a concave view from below, with linings of gold that rusted over time. The wooden ( Read more... )

pairing: taekey, fandom: 2pm, pairing: onho, fandom: fx, fandom: dbsk, fic: middlemen, pairing: jongyu, fandom: shinee

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Re: spot for onewlurver onewlurver April 19 2011, 03:42:51 UTC
OH.
MY.
FUCKING.
GOD.

Unni... This chapter was fantastic! The angst is literally killing me and I can't wait for the next chapter. I need to know who Jinki's appa is and if Jjong will at least know why Jinki is treating him like complete and utter shit. I'm crying for you Jjong baby ;____;

I honestly want to quote my favorite lines, but then I'll make about 4 comments XD So I'll just stick with about 3:

Because Jinki looked straight at Jonghyun from underneath Minho. And he breaks 3 years of sacrifices by lining his lips with an unmistakable grin.
-JINKI. LEE JINKI. WHAT in the FLYING FUCK are you doing? Why you break Puppy's heart? You are walking on a thin line baby: don't make me replace you as my bias *waving fist*

“You know.” Kibum whispers again into Taemin’s ear and it makes it seem as if they were watching a movie in the theatre, talking about the plot and how the characters make no sense. “She says she’s gonna shoot them but really she’s just gonna shoot at that vase.” Kibum points at the vase sitting atop the table by the window, only one of the many elegant porcelains resting in the dining area and, well, the whole fucking house.

“Two!”

“Isn’t that the vase you broke before?” Taemin whispers back with a mild smirk.

Kibum inspects the vase through narrow eyes, neck extending a bit towards the object of their discussion until he finally nods towards the younger boy. “Why yes, Taemin. Yes it is.”

Their laughs are cut short by the ring of the shotgun, the bullets passing through the said vase and shattering weeks of Kibum’s attempts to glue it back together.

“Goddamnit!” Victoria shrieks.

“Told you.” Kibum nudges Taemin’s shoulder.
- Fucking win 8D

Oh. And I'm loving Crayons right now. Maybe after everything is resolved Minho will let me take him home for a few days XDDD

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Re: spot for onewlurver hipslip April 19 2011, 06:22:10 UTC
YOU AND YOUR COMMENTS OF LOVE AND QUOTING I LOVE YOU.

LOL.
Taekey will always be relevant which is why they pop out of nowhere.
And maybe is you talk to MInho nicely. You know how much Crayons means to him. LOL. :D

unni loves your comment to bits :DD

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Re: spot for onewlurver onewlurver April 23 2011, 04:12:06 UTC
LOL LOVE YOU TOO UNNI 8D

TaeKey is just fucking love. They will forever be relevant in the most inappropriate times; God bless those boys :P

I'll cook a very nice meal for him and do something very nice to him don't know what that nice thing is yet though... I know unni. Crayons is very important to our Charisma ^^

dongsaeng loves giving her unni comments :D

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