(no subject)
B.F.F(at least to me)
am i but a memory to you
put out of your mind now that im not around
just a name scribbled on a page in your diary
left to be forgotten
rembered no more
am i but a memory to you lost in your thoughts
no cares of well being for a freind who once was so dear
all your compasion and comfort thrown away after my departure
someone to be replaced by another
i thought you were different
that distance was an obstical to be overcome
but now i know
you never intended to remain
a true friend
my best friend
such harsh reality
when a friend (I)
can be turned into nothing more
than a dust covered footnote of your past
even in the light of the truth
i will always keep you in my heart
a friend who was more like a sister
a friend who will always be welcomed with open arms
the (past) forgotten
a friend who can count on me till the day i die
even if i can no longer count on you
well it took a while but i guess my writers block has been lifted for now anyways i hope you can understand the use of parenthesis does this peice convey or evoke an emotion on the reader as intended im rusty so any feedback that can make it better is appretiated is B.F.F a common enough used phrase that most readers will know what it means or can be discerned from reading the poem
am i but a memory to you
put out of your mind now that im not around
just a name scribbled on a page in your diary
left to be forgotten
rembered no more
am i but a memory to you lost in your thoughts
no cares of well being for a freind who once was so dear
all your compasion and comfort thrown away after my departure
someone to be replaced by another
i thought you were different
that distance was an obstical to be overcome
but now i know
you never intended to remain
a true friend
my best friend
such harsh reality
when a friend (I)
can be turned into nothing more
than a dust covered footnote of your past
even in the light of the truth
i will always keep you in my heart
a friend who was more like a sister
a friend who will always be welcomed with open arms
the (past) forgotten
a friend who can count on me till the day i die
even if i can no longer count on you
well it took a while but i guess my writers block has been lifted for now anyways i hope you can understand the use of parenthesis does this peice convey or evoke an emotion on the reader as intended im rusty so any feedback that can make it better is appretiated is B.F.F a common enough used phrase that most readers will know what it means or can be discerned from reading the poem