BOING!!!!!

Jun 22, 2005 20:19

Be thankful your out of school people! I've had entirely to much homework it should be illegal I tell you!! Anyways went to school and then to Alex's, he showed me World of Warcraft .....Now that...is a cool game. Back to the real reason I'm writing I was cleaning out my book bag, (finally!!) and I found a poem I wrote, when I was having a bad day..week...month..anyway I was having a bad time. Tell me what you think.. If you think it stinks I don't mind I just don't know if it's good or not.

Can't you hear me? Can't you see?
All that's become of me?
My soul is tattered and caged
Saddened and enraged
by the feelings of worry and doubt
but I will never let it out.
I'v damned my soul to stay
Imprisoned and out of the way.
The world will pass it by
Unaware as it dies.
Can you ever understand
the reason I had it banned
from my heart from my mind?
To simple, to free, to kind
It wished to break apart the mask
I had for every single task.
It wished the world to see
The person that was really me.

(lol I put myself on my friends list I'm so easily amused)
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