From Coals to Flame: Part One- Sparks
Evie was unsteadily walking down the hallway in her hotel in Sydney, arms around her friend Amelia, who was too drunk to walk alone. "And this is why I don't drink..." she thought to herself as Amelia, affectionately known as Mia, chewed on Evie's shoulder. "Om nom nom nom, om nom nom..." Mia was saying, "
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one piece of advice - break up your dialog a little, it'll be easier to read.
& no, not too fangirlish. ^_^
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this is happy me- xD
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Update soon!
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ok, more soon :)
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and I think Mia has some chewing problems LOL
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