keep me if you steal me (thirteen au oneshot)

[himawarixxsandz]

title: keep me if you steal me
author: himawarixxsandz
rating: pg-13
pairing(s): daejae, banghim, ubomb, zikyung
summary: thieves in love
a/n: inspired bc someone asked me a daejae dynamics question so it got me thinking and yeah. shedding some spotlight on them since they don't get a lot in the main story.

Comments

[haneyon]

omg, daehyun you cute little upstart wanting to emulate the way banghim dress. ♥ i love himchan reminding daehyun he's just a boyyy, and I’ll hold you to that akjhawe. daejae, you'll be alright you precious pabos. .___. (oh and also i adore kyung being a complete grease even in cameo, pmsl.) these kids. .___. their whole hierarchy and dynamic as 13 that you've set up is still the best. ♥♥

[himawarixxsandz]

their whole hierarchy and dynamic as 13 that you've set up is still the best

mAKE ME CRY WHY DON'T YOU ;^;

[greasytree]

YES, YOU UPDATED!

Omygod i am so happy this one features daejae; it is really awesome to see what led them to being together and also being a part of the thirteen team. Your writing is superb as always ^^. Please update again soon~

[akaipenguin]

FIRSTLY THANKKKK YOUUUUU FOR BEING EASY ON YONGGUK'S PRISON TIMEEEE AND THANKKKK YOUUUU FOR RELEASING HIM AT THE END BRCAUSE YOU HAVE ABSOLUTELY NO IDEA HOW IM DROWNING EVERYONE IN MY HOUSE BECAUSE OF MY TEARS ABOUT BROKEN BANGHIM AND STUFFF AND GOSSSSHHHH THIS WAS JUST BEYOND DEPRESSING DESPITE THE FACT THAT THE STARTING WAS JUST AWESOME!!! GOSHHHHH AM CRYING 2012 HERE!!! ;AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA;

Thank you for the ending!! It was just so sad and pitiful and gosh life as a con artist was just beyond me and and and aishhhhhh IM CRYING AGAIN. THIS WAS JUST SO BEAUTIFULLY AND ANGSTLY WRITEN AND IT WAS JUST PERFECT. ;w; THANK YOU AGAIN FOR THIS AWESOME FIC!!!

<3

[iridae]

ASDFGHJKLHZSGBJRIBRSTGJKISSJKLDADARDJNCHKUSBGJEHVD I LOVE YOU
And I got a lj a few days ago so I can even comment properly xD

Omg though this is perfect <3 I can really see just what you were talking about on Tumblr how they're apart but they're still just as close and fit just as well as all the other guys even though they're like the babies and they are bABIES THEY ARE SO CUTE OH MY GOD. And Daehyun is such an ass with the couch thing and Youngjae's just so precious I just asdfghjkl

And ubomb are still just the boss pairing of this fic lol but when Yukwon went to tell them about banghim I just... Wow. I felt that, man, and how you wrote it I just found so real and... Idk poignant? I dunno if that's the word but it was really something, jfc
And then when they were talking on the bed I just... If something bad happens to them now I will just be crying all the tears like omg.

But. Yes. This is perfect and you are perfect and Daejae is now like #2 favourite ship in this series (lol ubomb) so expect more daejae questions okay? Cx

[matokii]

So... I'm not even sure how to start this review because my feels are getting out of league and I feel like jumping from a cliff from all of them, but I have to leave this review first

[himawarixxsandz]

;A; don't be afraid! your english is absolutely fine to me lol i wouldn't have even known it's not your first language if you hadn't said. TAT AND I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKE THE STORY SO FAR fjdskga;sIFGJA; THIS GORGEOUS COMMENT

[matokii]

I try a lot to write correctly because your story seriously deserves perfect comments and all ;~; I wanted to write something more interesting but I can't express myself in the way I really want in English ><

LIKE? I LOVE YOUR STORY, I HAVE INTENSE AND UNEXPLAINABLE FEELS FOR YOUR STORY WHEN I SAW THIS UPDATE ON TUMBLR MY HEART STARTED TO BEAT REALLY REALLY FAST AND I WAS ALREADY DYING WITHOUT EVEN READING, YOUR STORY CAUSE THESE THING ON ME OK AND I SHOULD STOP USING CAPS, BUT CAPS MAKE MY FEELINGS CLEARER OK

and I wanted to say last comment, but forgot it lol so I'll say now: you totally deserve an conglaturatory Block BAP concert, they should come to your city and make an big awesome show in which they would act parts of your story and it would be glorious (｀・ω・´)”